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Of all the sports I know, I like football most. The reason why I like it is the clever cooperation among players. When I was a child, my father taught me to play soccer by letting me kick a ball into the goal. At the present, I usually play football with my friends at weekends. Sometimes I play football with my brother after leaving school to take it easy. It is the fact that playing soccer is a way of exercising and relaxing efficiently. Not only do I like to play it but I also enjoy watching football shows and football matches. I am really addicted to it. Moreover, I am a fan of Manchester United. To sum up, soccer is the most interesting sport I extremely love.
Of all the sports I know, I like football most. The reason why I like it is the clever cooperation among players. When I was a child, my father taught me to play soccer by letting me kick a ball into the goal. At the present, I usually play football with my friends at weekends. Sometimes I play football with my brother after leaving school to take it easy. It is the fact that playing soccer is a way of exercising and relaxing efficiently. Not only do I like to play it but I also enjoy watching football shows and football matches. I am really addicted to it. Moreover, I am a fan of Manchester United. To sum up, soccer is the most interesting sport I extremely love.