Yesterday, after five subjects at school, I felt so tired and hungry. So, I wanted to go home quickly. Because I was in hurried, I rode my bike so fast. Suddenly, a traffic accident happened, it made all people and me frightened. Fortunately, It didn't happened to me and I felt so lucky. I think that it is the most frightening experience in my life.
Write a paragraph ( 40 - 50 words ) telling your feeling about a traffic accident happened
Because I was in hurry
... it made all people and I frightened.
I think that it was the most frightening ...
... it made all people and I frightened.
I think that it was the most frightening ...
Hi! I have some advice for you:
Avoid the repetition of "I" and add some conjunctions to make your writing or speech more subtle
For example:
After having five subjects at school, I felt so tired and hungry. Those reasons made me ride the cycle faster than it should be. All of a sudden, a shocking accident frightening all of the people including me happened. I am so lucky that it is not happen to me and it is obviously the most frightening event in my life.
Avoid the repetition of "I" and add some conjunctions to make your writing or speech more subtle
For example:
After having five subjects at school, I felt so tired and hungry. Those reasons made me ride the cycle faster than it should be. All of a sudden, a shocking accident frightening all of the people including me happened. I am so lucky that it is not happen to me and it is obviously the most frightening event in my life.
