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Write a report about education in Australia between 1997 and 2005.


Eva Novita Sari 47 / 71 2  
Apr 22, 2014   #1
Writing Task 1 (a report)
Write a report about education in Australia between 1997 and 2005.
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Answer:
The tables show information about the students per lecturer and the number of students in practice based subjects and lecture based subjects.

Generally, There are providing statistical information about the proportion of students per lecturer during 1997-2005 and the participation of students in practice in 2002 and lecture based subjects in 2003.

In the first table, it is showed that in 1997, the students were continuing education in Australia approximately 15,4 students per lecture. It can be seen that overall, we witnessed increase slightly of students in 1999 approximately 16,6 students per lecture. Next, the greatest increase was observed between 2001, 2003 and 2005.

The last table, the participation of students in based subjects mathematics in 2002, followed by 15,4 students, physics liked by 16,6 students and chemistry had level higher than others what chosen by students. Next, participation of students in practice the most popular was history which was 13.2 student and the figures for art and geography were almost identical approximately 12 students per lecturer.

To sum up, the tables give information that subject of art is less popular than other subjects what liked by many students in Australia.



upinipin 32 / 49 1  
Apr 22, 2014   #2
it is showed that in 1997

it was showed
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Apr 22, 2014   #3
to The tables showprovide information about the students' participation atper lecturerlectures from 1997 to 2005 and the number of students in practice based subjects and lecture based subjects in 2002.

You should mention the time periods in the intro.
provide information / presents details / show details
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Apr 22, 2014   #4
In the first table, it is showed that in 1997, the overall numbers in students in 1997studentswere continuing education studied in Australia approximately 15,4 percent ofstudentsparticipants per lecture. It can be seen that overall, we witnessedAn increase in participantsslightly of students in 1999 showed approximately 16,6 percent per lecture. Next, the greatest increase was observed between a year of 2001, 2003, and 2005 saw a major increase in the number of participants
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
Apr 23, 2014   #5
It can be seen that overall, we witnessed increase slightly of students in 1999 approximately 16,6 students per lecture.

There is too much redundancy found here .... " It can be seen that overall,", " we witnessed "... they disturb a smooth flow of your ideas. This task is aimed at assessing your report writing skills and in report writing you need to report things in the clearest and the most concise way. Unlike the IELTS Task 2 in which you enjoy more freedom in expressing your ideas and displaying your vocabulary knowledge, here you need to adopt a more official tone and present ideas in a clear concise manner.


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