What's wrong with your password?

Password Is Important for privacy your computer data. Password that your hear something to protect your data from unusable person. If you have account at hundreds different system we must think to have policy for you system. Old Password requerment is only one character system. New password at 1995 have a complex with Eight character example Uppercase, Lowercase, Digit, Symbol, No more than three of any character, Dictionary check. Result from 470 survey people want get more security from password and we also found new policy is annoying, New policy makes people feel more secure, 13% wrote down new password and 80% reuse password. A lot of people stealing password at internet. we should password not easy to guess. A lot of password using same type like name of animal, most popular artist or born date. We make must password base of things happy or something another person can not guess.

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Password Is Important for privacy your computer data[the computer data privacy] . Password that your hear something[it is rather confusing, try to arrange simple and good sentences] to protect your data...

... hundreds different system[,] we must think to have policy for you[the] system.

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