Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls.

Shopping effect on teens

It is clear that spending too much time for shopping centres is a tendency of teenagers in modern world. Personally, although there are many bad impact on young people and society, going to shopping also has some benefits on them.

Ono the one hand, shopping addiction is the main key, which will make troubled finance and some society issues. In fact, teenagers willing to pay a large amount of money without wavering for an unnecessary thing as long as they are interested. For example, young people who are big fan of Iphone

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