the option of uploading the document? bates further

umulbaneen 4 / 26

Dec 30, 2009 #1

ok can someone please tell me asap whether its stupid to write four paragraphs of
bates supplement essay when they state they want 2-3 paragraphs???

because they have given the option of uploading the document???/

please tell me asap cuz then ill have to cut off my essay

damo 9 / 29

Dec 30, 2009 #2

I said the same thing, try to consolidate and turn the 4 into 3. Or perhaps get rid of the worst paragraph? its hard to say with out seeing it. Good luck :] please any of mine that I have posted. Thanks

EF_Kevin 8 / 13053

Jan 7, 2010 #3

ok can someone please tell me asap whether its stupid to write four paragraphs of
bates supplement essay when they state they want 2-3 paragraphs???

Ha ha, well, yes, I suppose it is. But I understand why it is so difficult! I agree with Damien; try consolidating. You can usually improve your writing by cuttng out words, anyway.

remember:
one essay = one big idea
one paragraph = one little idea that supports the big idea