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Essay topic: Climate change - global warming / thesis statement



pinu 3 / -  
May 22, 2006   #1
kindly help in writing essay on this topic . I am 10 th std student.

Thesis statment for an essay - global warming / climate change

I wanted a good thesis statement for
suggestions, or some samples would help me lots

climate change --->(also info including about)---> humans causing it ----> something about industrial / aviation could be mentioned.

EF_Team4 - / 13  
May 22, 2006   #2
Greetings!

For an essay this broad, at your level of education, the only way to really approach this would be to take a very superficial, very big overview. For example, you could briefly touch upon, say, 5 different aspects of climate change in 5 different parts of the world: the rising oceans and their effect upon island nations; the rising temperatures and the effect this is having upon polar bears; and so forth.

Then you could find the most recent research in each of these five areas, and write to the depth required by the length and complexity of the paper. A solid conclusion tying together these 5 topics to show that climate change is indeed an emergency on a global order would be a good way to end.

Thanks,

Miriam, EssayForum.com
Mustafa1991 8 / 369  
Jan 9, 2010   #3
This topic sucks. For information search "IPCC" in google.
sgvaibhav - / 2  
Jan 9, 2010   #4
i know the info, but i cant contruct a good thesis, i end up making something vague
or something TOO DETAILED and long which is not required for a thesis
Mustafa1991 8 / 369  
Jan 9, 2010   #5
what the hell? you have no choice but to make an essay about the damage humans are causing and woe will be the plight of humanity blah blah blah. it's not as though you're even making a thesis where you argue something. you were already given your thesis.
sgvaibhav - / 2  
Jan 9, 2010   #6
:S
i have to construct a thesis for my essay, im given a topic, not a thesis,
suggestions would help me as well.
Jeannie 10 / 211  
Jan 10, 2010   #7
Sigh...

First, what do you know about global warming? --"carbon footprint" (I am beginning to hate reading and saying that:) please don't use those words in your paper...) "vapor trails and global warming," just anything your know about it...write it all down - scribble if your must. Does anything jump out at you? Good! Write about that as your thesis, and make it an argument for or against.

all made up, so do not use this>> "Over one million aircraft take to the skies each day, each of which causes 13oo pounds of noxious gas to be carried into the atmosphere. With over 200 million passengers seeking air travel, it is impractical to suggest shutting down the entire operation, but more consideration toward lessening the impact of aviation on the planet must become a top priority in the war against global warming."

This is not at all a strong enough statement for your paper - it is merely an example of a thesis.

I look forward to your essay submission!

Jeannie
psitutor - / 16  
Jan 10, 2010   #8
what is your long-winded thesis statement so far...?
EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
Jan 16, 2010   #9
This topic sucks. For information search "IPCC" in google.

Let's be good examples and only post comments if we have a meaningful contribution to make!climate change --->(also info including about)---> humans causing it ----> something about industrial / aviation could be mentioned -----If you want to write about aviation, you can narrow your thesis by focusing on the emissions that supposedly linger in the air for a long time, doing more harm as a result of being higher in the atmosphere. Aviation accounts for only a small percentage of greenhouse gases, but it is unique because of the way aviation emissions remain u higher in the sky, affecting things in ways I don't entirely understand. Much has been written about that.

I hope that helps! Sometimes you have to think outside the box to narrow your thesis. Sometimes your main idea gets narrowed as you read article after article and notice themes developing in your readings.

Related: Just a thesis about global temperature, not an essay.

I think you've got a good thesis started. I have just a few editing tips for you.

Since the beginning of the 21st century, the earth's temperature has greatly risen. Although people do not understand how they are affecting the earth, changes are slowly starting to be noticed - Noticed by whom? Better might be "changes are becoming evident"

Good job!
bebemala 1 / 3  
Apr 21, 2011   #10
Summarize a ceremony about climate change that I attended.

I need help on how to start an essay on a ceremony about climate change that I attended and Need to Summarize the ceremony.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
Apr 23, 2011   #11
Well... start by making a list of ideas you remember from the ceremony. Did you take any notes? Did they hand out any information?

Make a list of things you remember, and that will be the way to start.

Use one sentence to share an idea, and use the rest of the paragraph to explain it. One paragraph = one idea
:-)


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