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Yesterday, six people were trapped for five hours in a Wan Chai office.


samuel11023 3 / 5  
Jul 2, 2011   #1
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Yesterday, six people were trapped for five hours in a Wan Chai office
building when the electricity suddenly went off and they discovered
that the fire exits were locked. The Fire Services eventually rescued
the six. The drama began at 11 am ...

You are Pat Chan. You were one of the six people trapped in the building. Write a report for your own
school newspaper describing what happened.

ChloeElise22 1 / 2  
Jul 2, 2011   #2
What exactly is the drama that starts at 11pm? If you need help finding ideas to write your short story, you should begin describing the 6 people trapped in the Wan Chai office building. If you create exciting conflict within the group, the story will intrigue the reader and pull them into the story.

I hope I was able to help you a bit. :)
OP samuel11023 3 / 5  
Jul 3, 2011   #3
thank for your sincerely help..
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,335 129  
Jul 4, 2011   #4
If you create exciting conflict within the group, the story will intrigue the reader and pull them into the story.

Yes, great advice, Chloe! Stories usually have a conflict, and they also usually have some sort of "love interest." Someone who is in love with someone. I guess that is the sort of story people like to read.

So... what is the conflict? Is it a natural disaster? A terrorist attack? Let your imagination carry you. I look forward to seeing what you write about!


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