hey everyone
I am an international student and am really stuck with my graduate admission essay:((!My major is structural engineering.this is what I have drafted so far.
Plz go through it and give me your valuable feedback!This following para will be my 2nd para in the essay as i have not thought about the intro yet:(((!!
My undergraduate study at XXXX university provided me a strong quantitative training through a broad array of courses like Fluid Mechanics, Surveying, Geotechnical Engineering and Structural Engineering. But I was particularly fascinated by topics such as Finite Element Method, Engineering Materials etc.delete them.
My strong inclination toward both Finite element method and Material science eventually led me to do my undergraduate thesis work entitled 'Numerical Simulation of Flexural Behavior of FRP strengthened RC beams with ABAQUS'. As a part of the project's literature review, I had to do a rigorous background study of composite materials. delete them.
I was thrilled to see how advanced composite materials are capable of pushing the frontiers of modern structural engineering by presenting new alternatives to the traditional building materials. To perform the numerical simulation I gained knowledge of finite element software ABAQUS. Furthermore in my last semester, I took an elective course on finite element method. This sentence can be changed into : which I gained from the course FEM.
All these significantly improved my understanding of the subject and further increased my interest in it. Delete.
I am an international student and am really stuck with my graduate admission essay:((!My major is structural engineering.this is what I have drafted so far.
Plz go through it and give me your valuable feedback!This following para will be my 2nd para in the essay as i have not thought about the intro yet:(((!!
My undergraduate study at XXXX university provided me a strong quantitative training through a broad array of courses like Fluid Mechanics, Surveying, Geotechnical Engineering and Structural Engineering. But I was particularly fascinated by topics such as Finite Element Method, Engineering Materials etc.delete them.
My strong inclination toward both Finite element method and Material science eventually led me to do my undergraduate thesis work entitled 'Numerical Simulation of Flexural Behavior of FRP strengthened RC beams with ABAQUS'. As a part of the project's literature review, I had to do a rigorous background study of composite materials. delete them.
I was thrilled to see how advanced composite materials are capable of pushing the frontiers of modern structural engineering by presenting new alternatives to the traditional building materials. To perform the numerical simulation I gained knowledge of finite element software ABAQUS. Furthermore in my last semester, I took an elective course on finite element method. This sentence can be changed into : which I gained from the course FEM.
All these significantly improved my understanding of the subject and further increased my interest in it. Delete.