SOP Electrical Engineering(EE); I have just started writing

I have just started writing my sop. Just give me your suggestions about intro para. Help me if I could improvise a bit.

Communication with its boundless sphere of activities controls every aspect of human life. Communication Technology is the most widely and rapidly applied technology in contemporary world and its deep penetration into society has generated both a technology push and a user demand, soliciting researchers for further progress and innovation. I strongly feel the purpose of technology is better served if it could improve the quality of human life and I would like to be a part of any change that is for better. I believe that graduate study at your university will be my most prominent initiative to achieve such career objectives.

Thank you.

The admissions committee knows what Communication Technology is and what it does. Avoid sounding pedantic if you can.
Again, a lot depends on how you take this forward in the rest of your essay.

thanks for your advice..
Could I start something like ,

It was during my Undergraduate years while taking a course in Communication that it struck me how widespread communication technology has become & how far-reaching its impact has been on humanity.

Sounds better!
Try to create a story in your SOP that shows through your personality. Pick up a common thread and try to link everything to it.

And remember that writing a SOP is an iterative process.

Best of luck!