Writing Feedback / A breakdown of the various difficulties that citizens have when they live in a novel country [2]

A breakdown of the various difficulties that citizens have when they live in a novel country regarding to three different age groups and measured in percentage is illustrated in a bar chart. At first glance it is evident that the problems are faced by majority people aged 35-54 which sorting out healthcare is the most complicated problem.

The essential problem for residents are sorting out healthcare. There is a small gap between people aged 35-54 and over 55 who find healthcare as a problem in their life, by 2%. In contrast, just a few youngest group (18-34 years) experience this problem, at 32%. Another crucial problem for people in the middle group (35-54) is financial, over a third of the total. Likewise, the young people aged 18-34 shows 33%. In this case, the proportion of older age group is the smallest number, at 28%.

Turning to the less important difficulties, finding schools for children. People over 55 years find this easier, a very small number, at about 2%. The youngest group provides three times more of the total than older group. However, middle age group still has the biggest percentage, approximately 20%.

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Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: Modern World Provide an Unhealthy Lifestyle [3]

Question:
Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.

At the present time, the way of human's life is changing since there are plenty of advanced devices which have a great role in many aspects. Some people argue that this era provides unhealthy style in their life because convenient equipment reduces their efforts and produces much fast food. However, others believe that they are able to protect their health. I strongly believe that people would have the best lifestyle if they try totally to keep their health.

Modern era alters people's life because it produces lots of easiness. To illustrate, now workers operate computers which have advanced features such as internet connection. Consequently, they have to sit longer in front of the computers, so it will make their eyes become more tired. Another effect is their diet. It is difficult for them to maintain the nutrition in their food as they do not have enough time to prepare it. As a result, they tend to consume much fast food which contain sorts of chemical matter. Therefore, their lifestyle become unhealthier.

Others assume that although they have many activities, they can protect their health carefully. In my opinion, citizens who have a high awareness will care their bodies as long as possible. They can manage their time to ensure that they have lots of time for preparing their diet. Also, they should consume any simple dishes which fulfill their nutrition and spend little time. In addition, they gain much information from the internet, so it will be very easy to achieve a better lifestyle in this day. It depends on their desire.

All in all, it is clear that advanced technology alters human's life. Although it generates convenient situation where people lost their best way of life, they still have an opportunity to protect their life if they have a high awareness. If they do their best, then they obtain the best life.

Writing Feedback / The society should provide appreciation for doctors although also inventors are very important [4]

Inventors are not as important to society as doctors.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Healthiness is very essential in human's life since it is one of people's rights. Therefore, some professions such as doctors have a crucial role in community. I absolutely agree that society should provide appreciation for doctors, although there is another people who brings the significant benefits for residents, like inventors.

Scientists who discover any beneficial equipment do not obtain a serious reward from society. Even though their experiments generate many advanced devices, especially in health aspect, government and citizens just offer them retribution in the first time when the tools are introduced. The main reason is today, there are doctors who can operate these devices totality to help any medical problems. To illustrate, patients give their thankful for dentist since they maintain their teeth, but they override that dentists operate a device that someone produces. It is not equitable for inventors as they have spent most of their life to make a tool for resulting the best life. Consequently, inventors should obtain more concern rightly.

However, all residents can feel the positive effects of these convenient devices because there are doctors who learn and apply exhaustive each medical tool. Also, government assign doctors as a worker who has the high responsibility to overcome any health symptoms. It is an earnest and hazardous task because their works are related to human's life, if they have a mistake then patients can lose their lives. For example, a doctor tries to help a patient who has a dangerous ill, but the patient passes away. The patient's family will assume that a doctor does not capable to help their member, while it will be patient's destiny because the doctor has given his best effort. As a result, it is acceptable to represent a significant reward for doctors.

To sum up, it is clear that doctors have a crucial role in community as they provide their best effort to help many people. However, inhabitants should realize that inventors also have a great contribution, it will be fair if they gain a commensurate reward.

Writing Feedback / A breakdown of international trade of transports that use combination of both fuel and electricity [3]

The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles* between 2006 and 2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
*vehicles that use both fuel and electricity

A breakdown of international trade of transports that use combination of both fuel and electricity in Japan, United State, and other countries from 2006 to 2009, a 3-year period is illustrated in the bar chart. At first glance it is evident that United State had the largest selling over the timeframe.

In 2006, United State sold over 250,000 machines and reached a peak at 350,000 transports in the next year. However, 2008 witnessed a gradual fall by virtually 50,000 vehicles. In the end of period, the total of conveyances rose sharply to 325,000.

Turning to Japan and others countries, they stood at similar number, about 50,000 in 2006. Both Japan and other regions had small risen in the next two years, but the total selling was only under 100,000. However, there was a significant increase of Japan's trade in 2009, over three times than the previous year, at 325,000 machines. In contrast, other countries still showed a slight growth, just over 150,000 transports as the smallest number throughout the period.

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Writing Feedback / The number of inhabitants increased rapidly in the period of 1900-2000 in different world regions [2]

IELTS TASK 1: World Population by Region, 1900 and 2000

A breakdown of the proportion of the people living in the world in different regions in 1990 and 2000, a century year period is presented in pie chart. The most significant fact to emerge from the graphs is the number of inhabitants increased rapidly in this period. In any case, Asia had predominant percentage out of the other areas.

In 1900, the largest population was Asia, representing three-fifths of all citizens. Although it was still a majority proportion, by 2000 it had fallen to just over a half of the total which comprised Soviet Asia, well known as Asia Pacific. The number of residents in Europe was a half of Asia in 1900, at 25%. It was the second biggest demography, whilst 2000 witnessed a gradual drop at 14%.

In contrast, less population was seen in the remaining region. There were very small proportions in North America, Africa, Latin America, and others countries, at less than one in twenty. However, there was a slight rise in both Africa and Latin America between 1900 and 2000, by virtually 5%. In the same period, demography in North America and others regions remained nearly stable, at 3% and 5% respectively. There was a new area in 2000, Middle East and North Africa which had twice as more inhabitants as North America.

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Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: Should be the government control the water consumption of residents? [3]

As water is a valuable resource, governments all over the world should control how much water their citizens use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

All of people around the world have to consume water to still alive. Even though water is a sustainable natural resource, inhabitants should use it wisely since there is no guarantee of the water availability. I absolutely agree that government who has the highest responsibility of both human and natural resources has to oversee the water consumption of residents.

Different regions have different population. The total of demography influences the amount of water, an area which has more population will need much water. Basically, the highest consumption of water is acceptable since water is used in many primary aspects such as sanitation and irrigation. In addition, there are many advanced technologies that inhabitants can operate to purify water if the source is limited. To illustrate, citizens who live with polluted water can take a water purification tool, so they have lots of pure water. Therefore, it is not essential for government to manage the water consumption.

However, residents have to realize that sources of natural wealthy such as water is uncertain since it depends on rainfall. These days and ages, the weather is unpredictable, so the drought come in several areas as a serious problem. Taking India, Puerto Rico, and North Korea as the examples, residents in these countries lack of water. They cannot distill the water since there is no water there. Also, if they want to apply the technology to generate artificial rain, they have to spend lots of money. It is not the best solution as it brings negative effects on environment. Consequently, government and society have to cooperate to handle this problem.

To sum up, although inhabitants consume more water for their daily life, government has to ensure that water consumption of residents is not excessive because drought will come undetermined. It will be better if they prevent early this problem.

Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: ATTRACTIVE BUILDINGS OR PUBLIC SERVICES [3]

Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The architecture as a vital element of country improvement is assumed by some people. Whereas construct sorts of exciting models are crucial, others perceive that government funds should be allocated to regenerate the other establishment that can increase the quality of human's life especially in education and healthiness. I strongly believe that repairing the public facilities such as schools and hospitals will bring more benefits than build any spectacular scaffoldings.

These days an age, the unique and attractive buildings such as tower blocks are needed in several regions to represent their advanced architectures. It is important for every region since it will be their characteristic which people around the world never neglect the area. Taking Eiffel Tower in Paris as an example. It is very famous tower, so most of inhabitants around the world cannot circumvent the luxurious of Paris. A city will famous when it has an elegant landmark.

In contrast, there are many serious problems that government have to tackle. Quality of schools and hospitals is more essential to improve since it involves human rights and influences the capability of human resources. Schools as mediums of education and hospitals where people consult their health ought to obtain maximum funding from government. To illustrate, Finland has a high criterion in education system which offers remarkable services for students. As a result, the intelligent residents generate more new ideas that affect the country development. Therefore, a country has to guarantee maximally edification and healthfulness of their human resources.

All in all, whilst spectacular architecture is significant as an identity of a country, quality of public services such as hospitals and schools are more important for government, so it is acceptable to expand the money allocation for upgrading the standardization.

Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF LIVING IN ONE AND DIFFERENT PLACES [2]

In the past, people usually stayed in one place throughout their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different places in their lifetime. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both?

Continuing life in the same place of whole time was the lifestyle of citizens in long time ago. At the present time, most people spend their time in various areas, change their dwells from one to another place over the world. Living in one region brings benefits like knowing environment well and keeping touch with neighborhood, while people are easier to get bored and difficult to improve their knowledge. Inhabitants who stay in different places have a larger relationship and more new experiences. However, they have to adapt in new habitation and understand the culture.

A constant area brings positive and negative effects. In positive side, it provides familiar environment which is important for residents. It is better for them to understand the certain conditions in a place like the natural resources and temperatures as they live effectively by combining their capabilities and environment. Also, they are closer each other with the local because they have lived together in long time period, their life will harmless. However, they face flat situation and cannot find a new action, just repetition of their daily life activities. In addition, their knowledge is limited since they never gain the novel experiences.

On the other hand, citizens who stay in variant regions find sort of merits and drawbacks. The benefits are they know more people and it is excellent for their future as they have lots of colleagues. Moreover, they obtain more experiences which have a crucial part in human life since experience is the best teacher. In contrast, they live in the new habitation which means they have to show their efforts to adapt with the neighborhood and local. The local tradition is also requiring them to pay more attention since different places have different cultures.

To sum up, it is evident that different lifestyles such as live in same or different places have both positive and dire effects. People will have a great life if they are capable to understand and minimize the drawbacks.