Undergraduate / Immigration reform in the United States during the economic crysis period. Issue of Importance essay [16]


You are young but already brain-washed by the "independent" (wink) media. The media want to blame the immigrants for the government failures. The government controls the media in one way or another. Same story has been going on for decades now. But they don't mention most of the immigrants take the menial or low-paid jobs that an average US-born citizen would not touch with a 10-foot pole AND they pay taxes. Not to mention HALF of the "US" army soldiers ARE IMMIGRANTS (did you know the US government give US citizenship to immigrants who go to war as US soldiers?).

$10 billion is nothing compared to what the US governments has WASTED for nothing in the past 60 years. Just check the facts: propublica.org/special/government-bailouts

If you remember your ancestors have also been immigrants at one point (unless you are a Native Indian) then you should realize your statements are ignorant to say at least. $10 billion spent on HUMANS (immigrants are humans if you didn't know) versus $1000billion spent 2008 YEAR ALONE on institutions that still have no idea about a recovery plan - what would you choose?

Research Papers / GLOBAL WARMING and natural disasters essay [10]

Don't buy what politicians and other semi-experts tell you about global warming. The 'global warming' issue is a ploy by the government and other 'organizations' that want to get tax money for nothing. Global warming is something that happens NATURALLY every X thousand of years (between 20 and 40 thousands).

They try to sell you ice on Antarctica. No matter what you do there is NO WAY to stop global warming. It's like you tried to stop wind from blowing, or rain from raining, or sun from shining.

If I tell you there's too much wind on earth and that could cause flu bacteria to move quickly between the continents, you would also buy it (as most of the society would). Then I would get money for "research" etc. which would be like throwing money into a garbage bin. But people like to waste money (or rather the media and politicians know how to make them do so).

You are young and you should think for yourself.

Undergraduate / SUNY or Common App which is better ? [9]

Most students are lazy so they would choose the easiest way -- you choose the harder way and your chances will be better :).

Undergraduate / SUNY or Common App which is better ? [9]

If SUNY doesn't require an essay, what do they require?

Undergraduate / Obedient yet rebellious, disciplined, unruly; this person influenced me [25]


So are you only sometimes honest? I think using such cliche phrases is not a good idea in the academic world...

Essays / Grad School Personal statem. in Childhood Education Major; from art to education [9]

Why not focus on what you can do best as a general education student and yes - explain what positive things you brought from your previous classes.

Undergraduate / 'girl from a foreign country had impact' - harvard common app [26]

It's good, not sure about the word count though. Check your requirements. I like how you gather the reader's attention with a quote/question in the first paragraph.

Undergraduate / "Is that shadow mine?" UC #2... [3]

What is the prompt or thesis statement??

Undergraduate / "right now is my second chance" - UC Prompt #2 [3]

I think you should state more clearly in the first two paragraphs what you're trying to get accross; after reading the first 2 paragraphs I still didn't know what you were up to. State in one clear sentence what you're going to focus on later in the text. Other than that, it reads nicely, I like the flow.

Undergraduate / The love for politics was planted in me at a young age but did not have the opportunity to sprout [10]

Why do you focus on literature in the last sentence? Last sentence should nicely wrap up the thesis statement (related to politics).

Dissertations / A completed literature review with a thesis proposal? [8]

Thank you, that helps a lot. I'll post more questions soon. I wanted to let you know my instructor appreciated my plan to do the literature review (and I followed your hints :).