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houshina   
Aug 4, 2012
Undergraduate / "NYU's global network" / "Love intrigues me" - applying for NYUAD [NEW]

NEW YORK UNIVERSITY SUPPLEMENTS
8. SHORT-ANSWER ESSAYS

Please respond to each of the following questions using a maximum of 1,500 characters (spaces and punctuation included) in the space provided.
A. NYU's global network provides students with hundreds of academic areas of interest for students to cultivate their intellectual curiosity and to help achieve their career goals. Whether you are entirely undecided about your academic plans or you have a definitive program of study in mind, what are your own academic interests? Feel free to share any thoughts on any particular programs or how you might explore those interests at NYU on any of our campuses.

Almost 14 years have passed and I still remember vividly the day when I first held the crayons. That momentous day remains the trigger of a chain reaction that somehow results in my decision to follow Visual Arts. People cannot expect me to do Math problems for many hours but if asked, I can sit in front of the canvas painting all day long. To me, nothing is more captivating and enjoyable than producing a piece of art. Thus, choosing NYU Abu Dhabi, in my ideology, is the perfect decision. What is better than being accepted to a school, which is situated at a place that possesses such unique architecture and culture? Not only can I observe every corner of the Middle East's jewel but I can also widen both my intellectually and more importantly, artistic horizon. At NYUAD, besides learning theoretically, I even get the chance to put my talents and knowledge into practice. Consequently, nothing can be compared to that thrilling experience.

B. What intrigues you? Tell us about one work of art, scientific achievement, piece of literature, method of communication, or place in the world (a film, book, performance, website, event, location, etc.), and explain its significance to you.

"Love"- it is just a four-letter word but possesses transcending meaning. It appears in numerous media universally and has such a noticeable impact. In my case, I get extremely sentimental whenever I watch a beautiful love story. "Hana Yori Dango" definitely holds that title. To put it simply, it is about a poor high school girl whose will is strong enough to change a spoiled master from an aristocrat family and her surrounding. They fall in love and overcome multiple hardships such as their different statuses and interference of outside forces. I was nearly in tears when the female protagonist decided to sacrifice her feeling so that her lover can become the CEO despite their longing to be together. To others, this plot may seem cliché and unoriginal. However, I think through the wonderful acting abilities of Japanese talents, the film has captured numerous applauses and hearts. Never before have I seen any film, which moves me as much as "Hana Yori Dango". Thanks to the masterpiece, I somehow get the feelings what "love" is. It is like a fig. When one is cut in half, each takes the shape of a heart. That is why its bittersweetness is referred to as the flavor of love. Thus, in order to obtain a happy ending, things must be sacrificed.
houshina   
Oct 1, 2012
Undergraduate / Volunteer work. I signed up for Axon 2012 Service Learning. Commonapp 2.0 (be my savior) [2]

These days, it is usual to participate in community services. Thinking the best one should provide a two-way benefit, I signed up for Axon 2012 Service Learning.

Axon was an event under the effort of non-profit organizations, students and educational experts. It encouraged using service learning to solve social issues. So, it benefited those in need and the participants.

I can recall the process. On the first day, we were divided into groups. After discussing, mine decided to take the Little Rose shelter's orphans round the Museum of Vietnamese History and the Independence Palace. Then arrived an effortful month. We had our hands full with raising funds, making arrangements and reviewing history knowledge.

At last came the big day. First, we headed for the museum. So eager was my team to learn history that all my weariness vanished. Next, after the break was the Palace. The kids were so elated about it that they kept talking. Considering how exhilarated everyone was, the tour was deemed a success.

Though our trip ended, it still had an impact on me. While the children learned about history, we brushed up on our knowledge. Hence, the experience remains a great achievement in my life.
houshina   
Oct 3, 2012
Undergraduate / 'Free the Children Japan' Common App: Extracurricular essay [4]

I think telling more about your activity is better. If i was grading your essay, I'd want to find out how much you know and how involved you are. I understand that talking about the reason is fine but dont dwell on it too much.
houshina   
Oct 10, 2012
Undergraduate / 'Repairing the Local Area Network' - University of Texas at Austin SOP 2013 [3]

when it came time to apply to college
I think it's more correct to say IT CAME THE TIME
Furthermore, while I understand that you have stated your background clearly, you have not give the board of admission the answer why they want to accept you. Be more specific about your personality and what would you contribute to the university community.
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