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Abby002   
Jan 15, 2009
Student Talk / How to improve English writing? Learning through reading. [130]

You should search for reading materials that might interest you to read more. It is not necessary has to be a book, it could be magazines, newspapers, journal articles, and so on. While you reading, it is important to highlight words or sentenses that you do not understand. And then check out your dictionary to find out the meanings. It is very time consuming, however, you will receive your reward at the end of the day.

Good luck!
Abby002   
Jan 15, 2009
Writing Feedback / "In the middle of difficulty lies opportunity"; significant event or achievement [3]

Hi Justin,

You did pretty well in the first part. However, you did not answer the second question.

What were the results of this event or achievement?
This question is asking you to consider what do you achieve or learn from your family's business. Was this experience help to better your career goal?

Hope this will help.
Abby002   
Jan 15, 2009
Dissertations / Suggest topics: HR Doctorate in Human Resource Management [25]

I think you can try to apply the knowledge that related to managing people in a global economy.
Here is one of my idea: Identifies and analyzes the challenges you might encounter in multicultural workforce.

All the best.
Abby002   
Feb 22, 2009
Grammar, Usage / APA formatting - Review Essay [17]

If you are quote directly from the text, you need to include the page number as well. For example, (King, 2002, p.2).

This is APA format that i refer to.
Abby002   
Feb 22, 2009
Essays / Help to form a research topic (ethical dimensions) [6]

I need help to form a research question to analyzed in terms of ethical dimensions and includes issues related to decision making and leadership. Also, the situation must be an actual situation you have observed or experienced, which depicts effective or ineffective decision making and leadership, and one which can be analyzed in terms of ethical dimensions.

Welcome for any suggestions.

Thanks.

Abby
Abby002   
Feb 22, 2009
Research Papers / Research paper on Commercials on TV (ideas). [12]

"The effects of compulsive consumer buying tendencies on attitudes toward TV ads. " This is another great topic to discuss about how do the heavy exposure of TV commercial affect people behave and think.

Hope this help. ;)

Abby
Abby002   
Feb 22, 2009
Essays / "a defining moment" - Need assistance with writing an Essay (forgot the basics) [14]

a specific experience in my life that I consider "a defining moment"

Something that you experienced and had brought you to another new chapter in life, which you felt proud about yourself. It could be sorrow, happy or exciting moment. All depends on how much you know about yourself.
Abby002   
Feb 22, 2009
Essays / Help to form a research topic (ethical dimensions) [6]

Sean,

What do you think about this question? Do i answer the question?

What are the ethical issues would occur if the manager uses coercion power to manage the employees' behavior at work?

I know that this type of managing style is hard to get along with the employees. In my previous workplace, I worked with a sales manager who was a self-center and extremely result oriented person. He forced the employees to work overtime (without extra pay) when the manager does not achieve the sales target. He emphasized too much on the sales result rather than the employees' performance. This way of managing people would not stay for long-term, and it may cause many unethical problems. This condition has inspired me to write about the ethical leadership and how it influences the behavior of employees.

Could you give me some example about ethical rules guide people in decision making roles?
Abby002   
Feb 22, 2009
Essays / Help to form a research topic (ethical dimensions) [6]

Sean,
I need to based on my research question and write a report based on the following points:

1. Identify and analyze the major ethical or legal issue that associated with the situation
2. Discuss the key issues relevant to the case.
3. Discuss explicit and implicit assumptions that may have has an influence on the situation or the outcomes in the case

I feel like my question is too broad.

Kevin,
Thanks for giving another new thoughts about ethics, but i need to focus on the leadership dimensions and decision making.

Do you guys have any thoughts?
Abby002   
Feb 23, 2009
Graduate / reasons for pursuing an exchange experience [5]

I agree with Kevin. It seems like you only answer the first part of question. You should also talk about how this program will benefit for your career advancement and what you are wish to achieve in the future.
Abby002   
Feb 25, 2009
Grammar, Usage / APA formatting - Review Essay [17]

If there is no authors listed and no date mentioned, you need to find the title of the article.
For example,

In-text citation:

Many companies use Web 2.0 as their business tools ("Web 2.0 Summit 2008", n.d.).

References:

Web 2.0 Summit 2008.(n.d.). Springfield: Web Master.

Hope this is helpful.
Abby002   
Feb 25, 2009
Undergraduate / My 92 year old grandmother. She used to take care of me when I was younger.. [14]

I agree with Yahiriz. The structure of sentence on third paragraph do not match well. You might either add a little more information or delete some part of the sentence for a smooth flow.

Also, i edited some of you sentence.

She used to take care of me when I was younger. when she was still staying with my family. She has thatkind gentle smile whichwould make you want to talk to her when you see her.

After a month long-stay in hospital, my uncle brought her to China to seek medical treatment involving acupuncture.

In the last paragraph, you need to conclude that in what way that your grandmother influence you. Is that her value of wisdom or her personality who being determination?
Abby002   
Feb 25, 2009
Undergraduate / "The great communicator" - exemplification on a time I changed [9]

Well John, this is a piece of well-written work.

My advice for you to become an effective leader at home/ work: Learn to be flexible and choose the right social power to apply in different condition. Communication is always the best way to establish a strong relationship.

Good Luck!
Abby002   
Mar 28, 2009
Grammar, Usage / What can help a student to write a good essay (research for my assignment) [7]

For a research paper, you need to come out with a research topic. Then, you can search for articles that related to your topic. If you think that the topic is too broad and hardly could find any articles, try to narrow down the topic and be more specific.

Doing research is the most important step in writing a paper; although, it is very time consuming, but it will provide interesting ideas.

I agreed with Kevin, peer-review journals and research studies are essential for writing a good paper, especially research paper.

Hope it helps.
Abby002   
Apr 7, 2009
Writing Feedback / Economic paper: the role of opportunity cost in financial decision making [5]

Question :

Important conclusion on the role of opportunity cost in financial decision making.

As what I understand from the reading, opportunities cost could be the price that going to pay in the future, in another words, we have to make decision among the alternatives. Although it would be enormous to possess all worthy things, but resources are limited, which allow serving one purpose at one time. Market demand is the key factor to help the management to decide which is the best product or service to implement. In addition, the value of choice should have further benefits and cost relatively. For example, play station games and women magazines are two the most demanding productions; due to the economy crisis, company need to decide cutting back one production (though this is the next best value). As Livingstone (2007) wrote that "Effective management decisions require careful comparison of costs and benefits of alternative action". As a result, play station game shows growth potential and less cost compare to magazines. This could be the better production outcome and reduce unnecessary use of resources.

Please check my grammars and the contents. I am not sure whether i answer the question. Thanks.
Abby002   
Apr 14, 2009
Essays / BCC ESSAY on my academic life and career goals - I don't know what do I wanna do in future as my job [24]

There are many fields that you can consider:

- Business
- Accounting
- Finance
- Health Care/ Medical
- Information technology
- Computer Science
- Counselling
- Music
- Art
and so on...

I totally agreed with Sean. "Invent someting". Sit down and think what is your interest? Let's say you like drawing, may be you can choose the art program, for instance, graphic design.

Career goal is something you want to achieve in future. For instance, to become a project manager in 5 years time.
Abby002   
Apr 26, 2009
Writing Feedback / Financial anaysis essay (cash flows) [5]

Hi, this is the conclusion for the financial statement analysis. I need someone to check on my grammar mistakes. Also, what do you think about the conclusion? Is the onclusion able to show that Verizon is in the better financial position for investmenct? Please share your thought. Thanks.

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Despite the ten financial ratios, cash flows statement is another important financial data that shows the company's financial strength and stability. Cash flow statement is used to keep tack how much cash flows in or out from the company. Operating activities, for example, tell us how much cash the company generated from the businesses operations. A positive figure in this activity, the better for the company to sustain unnecessary needed to obtain external source.

On AT & T's cash flow statement, we can see that the operating activities in 2008 and 2007 were $ 33, 656,000 and $34,072,000 respectively. The result indicates the cash from operating was dropped by -1%. Although the percentage drop was low, but AT & T still have to acquire outside funds in order to maintain the operation of business, if it is necessary. On Verizon's cash flow, the operating activities were $26,620,000 in 2008 and $25,730,000 in 2007. There was a 2% sustainable growth within these two years. This implies that Verizon has funds in hand to support the daily operational cash flows activities. The analysis result shows that Verizon has better financial control in daily operation business. Whereas, AT & T need to cut back the operating activities' funds to generate better cash in hand.

Overall, the cash flows chart has illustrated that Verizon has ability to generate cash and increase the market value. This implies Verizon would be able to reduce debt, increase the dividends paid and repurchase more stock. In another words, Verizon perceived as a better financial value for investment.
Abby002   
Apr 26, 2009
Writing Feedback / Financial anaysis essay (cash flows) [5]

I added a new sentence in last paragraph.

Overall, AT&T and Verizon are very solvent and strong in the intensive Telecommunication industry. The average annual sale indicates AT& T was 25% growth and Verizon was 3% increased. However, the cash flows chart has illustrated that Verizon has ability to generate cash and increase the market value. This implies Verizon would be able to reduce debt, increase the dividends paid and repurchase more stock. In another words, Verizon perceived as a better financial value for investment.
Abby002   
Apr 26, 2009
Writing Feedback / Financial anaysis essay (cash flows) [5]

Dear Essay Forum group,

I really need some feedback for this conclusion. Honestly, i am runnung out of time. Please help me to correct the mistakes.

Thank you in advance.

Abby
Abby002   
May 5, 2009
Research Papers / Thesis statement: "Why Are Company CEOs getting Higher Bonuses?" [13]

Company gives bonus to a CEO because he/she is the person who make sure the company brings in profits and able to survive in a competitive business market. Without a CEO, company would not be able to run in a piece. In another words, they act like a brain of human body. They always being creative, innovative, and their's thinking is beyond than others, which a normal person can't imagine.

This paper required you to think about what is the CEO doing in the company? Why they get the highest salary? May be the bonus given is to keep the people who bring benefits to the company...
Abby002   
May 5, 2009
Letters / Job Portfolio: What do I include? [7]

I think it is important to insert some of your writing pieces. As Eric mentioned earlier, you should include anything that has been published. Also, the reference letters are important to strengthen your portfolio.

Certainly, it is good to have a cover letter to show your interests about the company and the job posted. Because most of the interviewer doesn't have time to read the whole portfolio, unleast they are interested to hire you. This will definitely help you landing an interview and even a job.
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