Writing Feedback / Watching or reading? - People can learn more from watching television [4]

Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the follow statement? People can learn more from watching television than by reading books?

Watching or reading, that is a controversial issue. Some people consider that watching television could help people learn more than reading books could. From their perspective, TV watching is usually associated with entertianment and advertisement. The man who watches TV is nothing but a couch potato. However, in my point of view, television watching is definitely instrumental in facilitating learning than reading books in many ways.

Think about the toddlers who are in kindergarten or in preschool. This children have not learnt too many words yet.. Therefore, it would be difficult for them to read books, especially those without illustration. Instead, watching television enable toddlers to acquire knowledge in a relaxed and interesting way. Take my little brother for example. He is 6 years old now. He likes to watching a cartoon series called "Little Scientist", which teaches many useful scientific knowledge by telling a funny story. No doubt, television show provide the audience with a audio-visual impression.

Not only can television viewing help little children to develop cognitive abilities, it can also help young student in learning any foreign languages. Watching American TV shows or sitcome is count as a popular and effective way for English learners in many countries. Tough preparing my Toefl iBT test these days, I still watch American TV show, such as The Big Bang every night. It provides me with a great atmosphere to learn thoes idiomatic phrases in a real context. Meanwhile, Sheldon will explain some Toefl vocabulary in a very humorous way, which impresses me indeed.

In addtion, by viewing some wholesome television shows, senior citizens get to know many health tips. These television shows often invite some nutritionists to attend the show to introduce different kinds of recipes in different seasons. They also teach how to do some easy massages at home, which are really helpful to preserve their health. It is much convenient for an old man with poor eys-sight to spend one hour to gain useful health tips from television viewing than spanding 10 hours from bopk reading.

All in all, I believe that people can learn more through watching television than by reading books.

Writing Feedback / Art Management; Colleges and universities should offer Job preparation training [8]

Whether college should offer job support program or not for the student before they start working is hot topic in the public. Some people claim that universities only focus on academic research. The mainly concern of college students is thier major study. However, from my perspective, job training is definitely necessary and significant for both students and colleges.

First and foremost, better job prepararion benefits student in seeking thier job. Take my self for example. My major is Art Management . When I was sophomopre, my department provided me with a great opportunity to apply for an internship program in 798 art district. After a compitition, I finally got a chance to take my internship in a gallery. That was very important experience for me. I worked with those professional workers together every day. They taught how to hang up every art piece in an approriated; how to introduce the meaning of the painting to audieces. Sometimes, I am lucky to meet some famous collectors and learn a lot from their talks. I really benefited considerably from my internship.

Not only does job hunting program benefits students, it is also beneficial to universities. No doubt, the compitition of tertiary education has greatly increased nowadays. By organizing different kinds of occupation training courses, universities could create more successful graduates, which result in an increasing of the number of applicants. Meanwhile, thoes successful graduates would intend to donate money to thier alma mater. More funding allows university to improve thier facilities and hire better teachers. As a result, the whole level of the college will improve and the reputation of the college will grow.

Enterprises also welcome thoes students who have job training program experiences. It means, the company doesn't have to spend extra money on organizing relevant training courses. Because the students are not green hands. They had equipped themselves well when they were in campus.

In conclusion, I believe that job preparation is indispensable in many ways.

Writing Feedback / Civilized behavior is one of the most valuable traditions of ancient Chinese good moral [5]

Topic :Do you agree or disagree:
the world is busy and crowded, we should not expect people to be polite to others.

No one can deny the fact our society in the last 30 years has been caught up in a storm of change. People nowadays get used to fast-paced lifestyle which is dramatically differ from the past. Time is Money is a prevalent mottom of modern men. Nevertheless, it is certainly not the excuse that people have to behave rudely in their daily life. Instead, gracious attitude is alway appreciated and contributes to the moral sense of the whole society.

Firstly, gentlely behavior is good way to show repsect to eldership therefore is beneficial to the harmony of family. Chinese ancient stories are filled with examples of such case. A story about Kong Rong is probablely the most famous one. Kong Rong was born in Han Dynasty. One day, when he was four years old, his grandfather held a big party to celebrate his 60 years old birthday. Kong Rong's mother asked him to divide a pear, then give them to all the family members. Kong Rong then sperate a pear into various parts and send them to everyone. His mother found that he kept the smallest piece for himself. She asked him why. Kong Rong explained that just because he is the youngest one in family, the elders deserve the big one. The entire family is please with his generous.

Secondly, a courteous man will obviously make a good impression to others. One of my firend who applied for his Master program in a German university last year. There was another candidate from Spain. It seemed that they were at the same level if one just evaluated by their applied materials and score. One day, after an interview, the professor took a bus together with two candidates to a public library. It was just at the peak hour. The bus was crowded. On the way, an old man got on the bus and found difficult to stood firmly. My firend immediately stood up and asked the old man to took his seat while the spainish boy just sticked to his place. One month later, my firend received the offer. Soon after, the professor sent him an email which mentioned about the little event in the bus.

To sum up, civilized behavior is one of the most valuable traditions of ancient Chinese good moral, which is worthy to pass on generations to generations. It is so wonderful wisdom of our predecessor that we shall inherit forever.

Writing Feedback / Classes and libraries always deserves much more financial support - two key elements for the quality [3]

Topic: Sports and social activities should get more financial support from University which is equal to classes and libraries

Recently,peolpe start to aruge that universities should spend more money on sprots and social activities as they usually do on classes and libraries. However, from my point of view, classes and libraries are so essensical parts of the universities that it deserves the prior in the financial support.

First of all, by improving the facilities of classes, both the quality of teaching and studing will increase. My university is a good example in this case. One professor who teaches Art History ever share with me his experience. 10 years ago, he usaually spared a whole day to prepare nearly 50 picture sliders in order to show just two pages content in a book. Now, since all the classes has been equipted with comupters and WIFI, he is able to spend more time to work on the content of class and think about how to show an image in different ways in order to help sutdent to understand it comprehensively. Students are also benefited from the great facilities. They now sit in a bright, clean classroom with internet available,water mashines,even stores. They can take note directly in their protable compputers and check all the relevant informations immediately on the internet, which lead to a high efficient study.

If university is a human body, library is often considered as heart of that body. It is easy to understand that one will do as much as he could to keep his heart fresh and vivid. The amount of books and collections of other matierlas of the library closely associate to the academic level of the college. No research program can be done without support of databases of the library. According to a survey conducted by China Social Academic Institution in 2009, 30 percent graduate students of Beijing are willing to apply for the PH.D program of Peking University just because the library of Peking University is considered to be one of the most bigggest Libraries in Asia which contains a great number of English books as well as the most advanced statistic searching system.

Well, admittly,students should practise sprots and social activities as possible as they can to keep health and enlarge their social circle.
However, it doesn't mean that the univeristy should distribute more money on that. Instead, university could encourage student to excercise more by organizing various compititions and ball games. Students are more likely to practise their communication skill by arranging differents kinds of study groups in the campus.

To sum up, classes and libraries always deserves much more financial support in university since they are two key elements for the quality and reputation of one university.