Writing Feedback / IELTS ; MOBILE PHONES - Essential or Unnecessary? [4]

many young people today have their own mobile phones and believe it is essential to their lives.other people dislike mobile dislike mobile phones and think that they are both a nuisance and an unnecessary luxury item.to what extent do you agree or diagree with these two points of view? its seems to me that these days is the technology day's . the mobile phone outweighed all other items because nowadays, each person in his family own his own mobile phone . alot of people think that mobile phones is very important to their lives other people disagree with them and consider them unnecessary. i personally agree that mobile phones are very important and we can't live without them . they are small easy to carry arround in case of emergency situations and u needed to call the police for instance.as well as , peole can also use mobile phones to take photographs , to use an alarm clock, to see the neww, to listen to music and download videos as well as games also people can use them 24 hours and stay in touch with thier friends from all over the world on the other hand, other people think that they are nuisance items because they dirturb them while sleeping or in classes howvever, peole consider them harmful because alot of scientists proved that talking in the mobile phone or putting it next to your head before you sleep damages the brain and may cause brain cancer it also can damage the eye if you use it too much.furthermore,some farmers are complanning about losing their bees .scientists are blamming the mobile phones because of that .saying that the bees are loosing their way back. scientist discovered that the beess have inside of them somthing like the gps that tells them their way back and the radiation that are caused because of the mobile phones are ruining them making them lose their way back.in addition to that mobile phones somtimes takes our attention from things that we should do with great care such as driving a car . taking al the points above into consideration although the mobile phones are considered harmful but I agree that they are very impotant in emergency situations or if you wanted to call someone to tell him somthing urgent happend with you.

Writing Feedback / IELTS; Should there be a law to get every child immunized? [3]

Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines . Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

Its widely believed that nowaday, using vaccines can prevent getting affected from lots of viruses . Some people argue that the state should not force the parents to immunise their children.However, I think that without vaccines the diseases could return and spread out easily from one person to another ,Therefore,law should be made to force parrents to vaccinate their children in order to ensure others children health.First of all, medicine has proved that vaccines is the most effective way of reducing the number of fatal childhood disease. As a result of the widespread practise of immunising young children many lives have been saved and some disease such as polio has almost wiped out.I think that the law should force the parents to immunise their children because there is alot of careless,illiterate,cheap parents who wont vaccinate their children if they were not forced to do it .So the goverenment should force them by not accepting any child in a school if he is not vaccinated to ensure other students health and to prohibit the diseases from spreading out from one to another . In previes centries some diseases were the result of poor hygeine but nowadays, water is cleaner and the sanitation is better.

On the other hand,Other people think that they have the right to take these decisions for their children because they know whats best for them forgetting that there is alot of parrents who are uneducated .

So i think every child have to be vaccinated in clinics to ensure everybodies safety as well as the lives of innocent children.