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Name: ahmad ainun iskandar
Joined: Nov 29, 2016
Last Post: Mar 23, 2017
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anonym28   
Mar 23, 2017
Writing Feedback / There are several reasons why nuclear technology is really worthwhile for humans life [3]

ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF NUCLEAR TECHNOLOGY.



Currently we are frequently seeing an announcement or news regarding the renewable energy of nuclear technology either in the TV media or in newspaper. Although this power bring about plenty of drawbacks in particular to people live and environment. However, this also has benefits to human life for a long time due to the fact that it has declined a waste of natural resources.

There are several reasons why nuclear technology is really worthwhile for humans life. Firstly, fossil fuel like oil and gas are running out at this present time, instead of this, nuclear is able to replace this energy. Taking an example, according to the specialist, this power could be replace the use of natural resources such as coal, oil, and gas. Another reason is that they could help to reduce carbon emission and green house effect which accounts for global warming. Furthermore, these are the merits of nuclear technology that tremendously integral to human life.

However, this power also has many negative impact neither on the environment nor human life. Refers to the investigation of Observer, people are worried that terrorist could steal these radioactive materials and uses it in a wrong ways. Moreover, there is no way to decontaminate this radioactive material up to now. At last, it is important to note that it's more safety to generate energy from solar, wind or water power instead of utilize nuclear.

To conclude, despite the fact that nuclear technology bring some benefits for human. However, it also has many disadvantages for human and environment.
anonym28   
Dec 5, 2016
Scholarship / "Every strike brings me closer to the next home run" Global UGRAD Program [4]

Hy there , i am interest with your essay because of the fact that, plenty of information can be obtained from your essay.
but, actually, i've found some errors in your essay, which is little annoying, that is in sentence
(Being an UGRAD participant (...) different ethnics and behaviors ) actually behaviour
is uncountable noun
anonym28   
Dec 5, 2016
Writing Feedback / Snowman Revenge - it was built on a hydrant. [5]

WELL DOWN, i am interest with your essay, but there are some errors in your spelling and you ought to read more to improve your spelling

these are my correction,:Mary was 10 yers old( you ought to write years at that sentence,
:The family is happy and take foto ( you should write photo )
:. Suddanly scott go to new snowman to brike again(suddenly )

that's all. thank you
anonym28   
Dec 5, 2016
Writing Feedback / BE KIND TO OTHER PEOPLE [2]

Everyone has already taught from their teacher, That An eye for an eye, and a tooth for a tooth, which means if someone mistreats you and considers you As his enemies, You ought to give him revenge As far as you can, with reference to his action for you.

However, your God has said " do not tried to attempt a revenge to your enemies" in the event that he slaps your cheek, then turn and let him slap your other cheek or someone sues your shirt, give up your coat and let him take it. On the other hand, At all times people said "Love your neighbour and hate your enemies" but your God said "Love your enemies and pray for anyone who mistreats you" then you will be acting such a good man, in the final analysis God will reward for your kindness.
anonym28   
Nov 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / REMEMBERING MATH TEACHER JAIME EXCELENTE [3]

At that point in time, We remembered one of the best teachers in United states. He born in 1930 in la paz, Bolivia. Both of his parents were teachers .

On the other hands, to follow his parents footsteps, jaime came to The united states in order to learnt speak English and repeated his collage education and teacher training.

In 1974, mr.jaime became a teacher in Garfield high school to teach mathematic, almost all of his students came from poor area in Los angeles, California. Lots of them had serious problems in illegal drugs, gengs and violence.

Jaime started an advanced math program with a small group of students, 18 of his students took the advanced placement test in calculus, they all passed.

At the present time, Jaime received lots of teaching award from the government. Then he retired from teaching in 1988, and died on march 30,2010
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