Writing Feedback / Writing Task 2 Sample for IELTS: Discussion and opinion about Internet [3]

the role and effect of the Internet

In the recent century, myriad people rely on internet to attain information and to communicate each other. Even though, internet gives beneficial aspect but some people think it obtains drawbacks especially for finding information. This essay will discuss about the both views.

A lot of advantages of internet are preferable reason why people keep it to use it. The main factor is economical aspect. Internet provides cheaper fee even free, communication for instance. By using skype, teamviewer and other social apps, human may not spend their money for conveying their talking cost on internet.

On the other hand, internet remains disadvantages effects. Those aspect are mostly related to information. People are easy to access the internet, as a result many of them put much information on it without no filtering. This problem affects writing originality or we call it paraphrasing problem. Some of them just copy and paste data and it become immense obstacle on academic.

To sum up, in my opinion, people can not deny that they need effective and efficient way of their activities. Internet supports the necessary for them. By using internet, it means that we should more carefully to obtain information which is reduced by broad knowledge and learn much. So that, we can prevent from the false data or information.

Writing Feedback / Line Graph Task 1 IELTS sample 2017: Petrol expense in USA and UK [2]

USA & UK - petrol expenditure comparison

The line graph depicts the proportion of petrol expenditure both the United States and the United Kingdom. Overall, it can be seen that the poorest people in America spent their money for the highest proportion on petrol, while the poorest community in British use the lowest percentage on that fuel of their income.

Looking at the details, the spending proportion of the poorest in USA is 3.9% to 5.2%. Following that, the middle-income expense capital on petrol from a twentith to just under a twenty fifth which is similar proportion of middle-income expenditure on British. Next, 4% to 2.5% are the lowest level being reached by richest people in USA.

In United Kingdom, the lowest income people spent the smallest proportion of income on petrol at 0.5% to 2.5%. Interestingly, middle-income and richest community in UK allocate their capital nearly similiar around 3% to 4%.

Writing Feedback / Pie Chart Task 1 IELTS Sample: typical house spendings in Japan and Malaysia [5]

The pie chart compares the proportion family expense in Japan and Malaysia in five different categories (housing, transport, food, health care and other goods and service) in 2010. Overall, it can be seen that both of countries showed the smallest spending on health care category.

Looking at the details, Japan and Malaysia spent the least capital on health care at 6 % and 3% respectively. Next, transport spending was the second lowest expense in both Japan and Malaysia but a domination was seen in the former with more than double.

Turning to another comparison, the data showed Malaysian which dominate two categories both housing at 34% and food 27%, compared to Japan accounting for 21% on housing and 24% on food category. However, other goods and services figure was the most popular in Japan at less than a third while in Malaysia this only recorded at 26% of total expenditures.

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