... that has many benefits. These days, the vicinity of parents permits their children to use

... that it may have a profits of (...) the usage of it should be ...

The technology helps to accelerate learning ...
... the information relating to their study which ...

A good case in the recently years, the parents wish that ..., (you may lack an ordinary verb) due to (it needs because or etc) the majority of parents ...

the presence of computer is completed by ...

giving the chance to children to explore knowledge ... (you may lack one verb)

hey want to looking look for new experience which is not knew known by them

whereas their parents do not understand about it.

the vicinity of parents uses tablet or computer (...) and the others providing provide videos ...

Ultimately, the utilizing of computer have has an a tremendous profit of (...) knowledge that will be master about in technology and science. Furthermore, parents play a part ...

The advanced of technology influences ...
Regarding to this these reasons, ... (see spelling) the disadvantages you may need one verb again. Analyzing about this will be written in this essay.

... age on children encourages them expert ...

they can use many applications such as ...

While when they are able to use hardware, it easily is easy for these children ...

like printer without need needing a help from adult

their skillfull to surf the Internet will increase tremendeously (see spelling) because they often to spend much time for on computers and gadget, .....

there is a consequences affect by (...), but the benefits biggest are bigger than the drawbacks.

... digital equipment stimulates their talent (...) and surfing the internet better, (...) outweight (you may need a verb and see spelling) the demerits.

sophisticated technology becomes the primary ...

... and it makes they do them not have any ...

Because of they get accustomed ...

children is are permitted by ...

computers due to provide providing their sophisticated ...

Analyzig this circumtance that computers and tablets can make the kids smarter ..... (you may need one verb again to complete your sentence)

more information could built build after modal, it would be a bare infinitive their brain in ...

if an early age people is getting

kids who (need a verb) familiar with the ...

... gadget often obtains an achievement in their

the school because accessed easily please see the pattern of sentence

Children can use IT to access every ...

While more active and efficient.(see panctuation) The other examples are auto cad, ...

children who using computer or (...), it are more smart ...

There are many informations = this is uncountable noun can use to support ...

The contents usually is are more

The subjects such as physics, (...) can download (it will be better to use passive voice to suit with your meaning) in the computer or tablet.

It is because of more effective and efficient.

introducing gadgets (...) abilities are is often conducted ...

to access some information around the world than demerits.

technology by create = creating some new tools likely, tablets

This shows, that the technology be is able to

are used to surf in the internet

which is saved (you want to use active or passive voice?) many information to be accessed

whereas their (they) solely use their gadgets and

parents believe that is more (why is your verb "is"? where is your subject?) favorable to introducing

to spend much time by on playing

is overwhelmingly than the detrimental effect

the detrimental effect, which (this "which" refers to what?) are both will be written in this essay.

that this increases their ability on on technology

that world work alarmingly the requirement ...

They thaught ought to preparing ????? their children on ...
Let's (no need to use construction since this is an academic writing) take an example, .

... playing gadgets bring (where is the subject of this verb) the drawback

they have to (this is similar modal of must, so as that this needs a bare infinitive verb after this modal) managing their time ...

there are the positive (...) for children which who are outweight (see spelling) the negative impacts...