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Networking can pave the way to engage each other in the community - Chevening Scholarships [3]
@FatemahEbrahimi
Dear,
Reading through your essay I found interesting the various organizations you listed as your network, but this does not fully address the prompt. How have you utilized your membership at the Afghan women network and Empowered women organization to achieve set goals and objectives. Meeting the chief of Party of Afghanistan Social Organization (ASO) was a great opportunity, how have you been able to engage him to accomplish other objectives that could benefit your organization or the public? Your internship at the NGO was an opportunity for you to meet influential people, if so, how did you manage this network during and after your internship?.
The Last paragraph seems confusing, "I do believe what I have mentioned above are samples on how the networking skills were supposed to be utilized in order to make a positive influence. In the future, I will devote my opportunity to developed my networks with the Chevening community to keep us connected with each other in post the Chevening program. The network that I have built will definitely have mutual benefits to all the Chevening awardee, future scholars and alumna, throughout cooperation and mentorship".
The first line implies that you are unsure of how to address the prompt, "Samples"? kindly go through this paragraph again.