ClockWork
Dec 28, 2020
Writing Feedback / Online shopping is becoming more popular. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds [3]
I think there are some problems with your writing.
Firstly, your opinion seems to be illogical and unconvinced. I think you had noticed this but you didn't have any choices because of misunderstanding the question. The question meant if it had positive or negative effects on the environment. However, misunderstanding the question made you think that you have to write about the negative effects.
Secondly, I am not sure about the question as you didn't write it clearly but I think it is not necessary to talk about the solutions if the question doesn't require you to do it.
I think there are some problems with your writing.
Firstly, your opinion seems to be illogical and unconvinced. I think you had noticed this but you didn't have any choices because of misunderstanding the question. The question meant if it had positive or negative effects on the environment. However, misunderstanding the question made you think that you have to write about the negative effects.
Secondly, I am not sure about the question as you didn't write it clearly but I think it is not necessary to talk about the solutions if the question doesn't require you to do it.