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autumnwave   
Dec 28, 2009
Writing Feedback / Computer is useful tool - has many functions [3]

Keng
Thank you Keng so much!
I still remember that you instruct me how to post essay into essay forum. From that day on, I always try to write English and post into forum to receive your comments.

I know that I'm bad at English, therefore I must try more and more. I'm not afraid of people laugh at me. It's essential that I could improve my English from your comments :-)

Have a good time!
autumnwave   
Mar 23, 2010
Writing Feedback / DREAM BRING ME TO ANOTHER WORLD [4]

please read it and help me improve idea, grammar or vocabularies. Thank in advance!

Toni Cade Banbara said that: "When you dream, you dialogue with aspect of yourself that normally are not with you in daytime and you discover that you know a great deal of than you thought you did". She was right to say that for many many situation in real life. But there are some strange matter in this life which science still isn't able to explain. Intuition is an example to prove that. For me, dream deprives from both myself and environment.

Dream helps me not only deprive series of suffering mental breakdowns but also contact with another aspect of life which I couldn't control it.

When I dream, I don't think I dream, but that is real, real life of me. Although I still remember what happens in my real life, but real life sometimes become incorrect in my dream. For example, my father died from 2006, but I always think he is alive in my dream. I deny myself with my conscious. I still remember my father went away from me for a long time, but in my dream, I feel as if he had been traveling someplace and after that he return with me.

After my father died, I hold his shirt for keepsake. Over two years, I dream of him. He smiled with me and ask me: "Where is my striped shirt?". Long time passed by from the day my father said goodbye with real life. I still remembered I put his shirt in my draw, but I was lazy to find it, I told to him: "You're not her (my house) for a long time therefore I hide it carefully". He brusted out laughing as if he just heard a funny story.

Sometimes, I saw him in my dream, I took me a meat-loaf, he saw me eating and asked me: "how delicious is it?". In my dream, my father never dead. He is happy to meet me. He acted as if he wanted me that he is always beside myself. When I bought new computer and connect with enternet, I also saw him started it and ask me how it use. He said that he made friend with computer when I went to work...

However, it is not whenever I missed him, I could see him. There were some months I couldn't see him in my dream. There were some times, he met quickly, he said he was busy going somewhere.

In short, my father is always a guest in my dream. No sooner he came than had he gone. After he had gone, I happen to suddenly remember why I forget to ask his phone or his place.

I think dream sometime brings me to place which I couldn't image. Life has many wonderful thing and dream also.
autumnwave   
Mar 30, 2010
Writing Feedback / Transitions in a human life [3]

There are many transitions in a life of human. The stage of mature is often to be respected the most.
When I was a child, I always waiting for the day I became mature. I though that time was wonderful when I myself could make up my mind every thing in my life. I would go to work what I like and love who I want. And there were many many interesting thing was waiting for me to enjoy.

When I become mature indeed, I recognize that life is not like what I think. And my dreams in childhood is only a fairy tale which I was made up by imagination. The real life is so harsh. Job, love and friend are not pure as we were in childhood. And it's natural, I undergo the hurt when someone stab me in the back. My heart often breaks many times because of my innocent. It's the time for me to recognized that childhood is always the most wonderful stage in a life human.
autumnwave   
Oct 31, 2010
Writing Feedback / Vietnamese iconic festival dish [NEW]

I would like to introduce with you about New year rice cake (bánh Tét) as Vietnamese iconic festival dish.

Vietnam was influenced by China (about 1000 years ). China conquer Vietnam from BC to 938. Many cakes in Vietnam are considered getting from China, but there is no evidence to prove that Bánh Tét have source from China. And the author said that Bánh Tét is like Vietnamese identity symbol. Because New year rice cake in Vietnam (banh Tét) sourced from "banh chung" like the following legend. That meant it appearing before China conquered Vietnam. Additional, bánh Tét could preserve from spoiling in long time. Besides, bánh Tét is durable and transportable. Thus, it was close with Vietnamese in times of trouble and war. Because When they took part in war, they hid the rice cakes in their wells. Moreover, Bánh Tét made from stick-rice, green been and port fat. They were representative of Vietnam's agriculture. And in the end, banh Tet was sticky, and it's difficult to separate from each other. For this reason, Vietnamese believed that Banh Tet had standed for solidarity of Viet Nam

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