collegecrazy
Dec 31, 2009
Undergraduate / STREET GUITARIST; NYU - my movie, Beautiful Song [5]
This is what I changed it to:
Discovery. [my name] travels the world to conduct research for her book. On her journey she is touched by the stories of a French film director dying of cancer, a tribal chief of Peru, a Thai ex-con missionary, and an African child soldier. Through her expeditions she learns the importance of perseverance and culture, and the hardships of survival and regret. As she learns more about this people, she also discovers more about herself.
This is what I changed it to:
Discovery. [my name] travels the world to conduct research for her book. On her journey she is touched by the stories of a French film director dying of cancer, a tribal chief of Peru, a Thai ex-con missionary, and an African child soldier. Through her expeditions she learns the importance of perseverance and culture, and the hardships of survival and regret. As she learns more about this people, she also discovers more about herself.