BORE
Feb 9, 2010
Poetry / analyse this poem -- walking in cluster of clouds [4]
love
walking in cluster of clouds
shinning blue stars
twinkled ,glitered in your heart
love sprinkled diamond dust
strolling in sparks of the night
love in stolen haerts.
im just a new writer,please comment and critisize my piece so i could sharpen my writng skills.
love
walking in cluster of clouds
shinning blue stars
twinkled ,glitered in your heart
love sprinkled diamond dust
strolling in sparks of the night
love in stolen haerts.
im just a new writer,please comment and critisize my piece so i could sharpen my writng skills.