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Freedom for creative artists to express their ideas in whichever way they wish [3]
Dear Trang,
Here are some of my suggestions:
Arts are the mirror reflecting the real life and wishes of people, so they are indispensible to human's soul and life. There is a though that creative artists should be given the freedom to do great works. In my opinion, some procedures from the government are necessary to guide arts
in which can support improvement of societyin the way that can help develop the society .
In Western countries, artists have much more freedom than in Eastern. Many people perform on the street, show their abilities in drawing, singing, dancing, etc in whatever way they like. However, sometime
s they lose their control and do unsuitable things such as wearing sexy clothes, singing worthless songs, drawing pornographies, etc. It conflicts
towith their culture and moral rules
(moral standards) . Therefore, government should have some restrictions to limit these cases
,as well as topreventpreserve traditional value and nation image.
Besides, works of art often have strong influence
toon human's mind, especially
to children
's . Unhealthy content in books, films, songs, etc causes pessimistic attitude, even leads someone to crimes. Children
see violence, sex films, bookswho are exposed to too much violence and sex in films and books will be curious, and imitate
something like thatwhat they see . It is so dangerous for youth if family, school and society do not finger out the solution to protect their child from poisonous arts and also help them to have more awareness
aboutof its negative effects.
However, true artists always try to honor the beauty, so they use their inspiration, imagination and talent to make
(create) wonderful works for humankind. They should be given as much freedom as possible.
In short,
depends on different culture in each country , artists will have different rights and obligations
in different countries and cultures . They still have enough freedom to follow their ambition except some fields which are not good for society. Government should take responsibilities for controlling this problem.
One more suggestion: You should suggest some measures that the government can take to tackle the presented problems :).
Keep practicing and good luck!