Undergraduate /
"Chopsticks and Vietnamese Opera" - College of William and Mary [11]
I'm actually a little confused. Yeah, it was a fun read, but it didn't really tell me to much about you.
Here's what I got from you essay:
1) Your dad is a mean Vietnamese man who would rather you be tortured by a nanny that have you not know how to use chopsticks.
2) You think that the instructions on Chinese takeout things don't work. (Which, by the way, they do...)
3) Your nephew can't use chopsticks correctly. So fie upon your older sibling for letting your father's grandchild handle chopsticks incorrectly.
Basically, I think you focus too much on chopsticks and too much on yourself...
The first and last paragraphs don't make too much sense, and what was the "Chromic Frolic?" I don't get it. I mean, sure it sounds clever, but it doesn't apply...unless I'm incredibly dense and just don't see it.
Just my two cents :3 Hope it helped.
...and being Chinese, I found the last para a bit offensive. Might consider changing the wording.
