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Sep 3, 2014
Writing Feedback / Ielts - Advertisements have become part of our life and it is impossible to ban them [2]
Advertising has become a huge business in the modern world.
Well, do not drag too much on this idea as you may run out of time. Start your essay with a hook and then quickly move into introducing the background of the topic.
Well, this sounds a bit vague. It is nicer to finish your introduction with a clear statement expressing your view on the issue. And then in the body paras, give reasons (one per body para) that you use to justify your view point and then support them with specific examples. The reader would find that approach more convincing.
These days advertising has become a huge business.
Advertising has become a huge business in the modern world.
Various forms of advertising is common in almost all kinds of business.There are different kinds of opinion on advertisements today.
Well, do not drag too much on this idea as you may run out of time. Start your essay with a hook and then quickly move into introducing the background of the topic.
I will discuss both these opinions in detail within this essay.
Well, this sounds a bit vague. It is nicer to finish your introduction with a clear statement expressing your view on the issue. And then in the body paras, give reasons (one per body para) that you use to justify your view point and then support them with specific examples. The reader would find that approach more convincing.