Undergraduate / "becoming a successful businessman" - Why in attending the University of Notre Dame? [4]

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For me, becoming a successful businessman is always the stepping stone in achieving my long term goal of helping the less fortunate. I believe University of Notre Dame is the place for me to receive a holistic education while pursuing my passion in business. The hybrid education system of Notre Dame is unparalleled. For first year, besides focusing on liberal arts education, Notre Dame provides students with the resources and curriculum to explore their interest towards specific careers. By attaching student to an advisor, students can make better choices when planning their education. Notre Dame provides student with a wide range of research opportunities. Centre for Social Concerns is a place that I would love to engage actively. The amount of emphasize on creating social awareness and attachment to the community really impressed me. I have faith that Notre Dame is the perfect university for me to furnish my dreams.

Undergraduate / "Quality of teaching; Research Centers" - why is Emory College [3]

Becoming a successful business man is always my stepping stone in achieving long-term goal of helping the less fortunate. With this career goal in mind, I was really excited to find out that I would have the opportunity to receive professional business education in Goizueta Business School. With Emory's liberal arts education and Goizueta's vigorous program, I would be able to explore my other interests while pursuing my passion in business.

Firstly, I was impressed by the quality of teaching. Emory ensures that its faculties are teaching effectively and controls class sizes seriously. The rigorous coursework and internships offered by Emory college connects classroom concepts with real-world application.

Also, Emory's intensive community engagement provides me with many options to explore my interests in helping the community. Volunteering is cultivated as a culture in Emory. Volunteer Emory is just one of the many organizations that encourages students to help out in the community. Research centers such as Carter Center provides the resources for students to develop volunteering programs. In addition, students are also given ample opportunities to conduct original research that addresses community programs.

The hybrid education system of Emory is unparalleled. Besides focusing on liberal arts education, Emory provides students with the resources and curriculum to explore their interest towards specific careers. This will prepare me with the capacity to pursue my education and start my career in Goizueta Business school.

I have faith that Emory is the perfect university for me to embrace my education and furnish my dreams.

Undergraduate / "public drama performance" Notre Dame-time when you have surprised others or yourself [4]

Tell us about a time when you have surprised others or yourself by doing something unexpected.

During my first year in high school, I participated in the school's public drama performance as a main actor. I was given multiple roles in the performance, but there is one role that I accepted with much reluctance-impersonating the opposite gender. Having invited my family ...

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Should I accept it? Impersonating the opposite gender in front of the public is a new challenge for me. I have already taking on multiple roles, and it would be difficult to multi-task. Knowing that my parents are very traditional, I was worried about what they would think after watching my performance? After much self reflection, I convinced myself that every challenge is a learning experience, and I should cherish every opportunity to enrich my high school life. I put aside all the stress and acted out this role to my best ability. The amount of laughter and applause that my impersonation brought to the audience was not expected. My parents and friend were amused by my radical transformation on the stage and many of them praised me for my professionalism. Overcoming the fear of breaking through my comfort zone allowed me to develop my true potential to the fullest.

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