Writing Feedback / Traveling to get job . . Environment is the Victim [5]

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Nowadays, the chances of getting job are few as a result of small town. So, some of workers resort to travel for long distance to get a job. As a result of that there is traffic congestion and damage to the environment. in this essay I will look at several solutions that might government or companies work on them to protect environment and reduce traffic congestion .

Firstly, government can provide or increase public transportation and make workers about that and suggest to them to use it instead of traveling separately.. so, if they use it, the environment will not pollute in a big way as if they travel separately.

Secondly, some employees who travel depend their work on computer or internet so, government can let them to stay at home and finish their work online.

Thirdly, there are many companies have many branches , so they can transfer their workers to the branch where it is easily or not far to reach to it. For example, my brother work in Dubai airport customs department and he from time to time go and return. As a result of that, he presented transfer request to the them to transfer to Hatta customs which nearest to him. Now, he is far from traffic and sometimes he go with his friend together in one car to their work.

To sum up, it is important that government and company care about workers and environment and try to satisfy both of them. We don't want to lose them by traffic congestion and accident.

Writing Feedback / Essay about exercise which is element of healthy lifestyle [2]

This article is about exercise which is element of healthy lifestyle. people think that strenuous sport and exercise is helpful for having healthy body. In fact, physical activity needs gradual converting from mild to moderate to get healthy body. So people need to think about how much exercise that they need.

There are differences between to be fit and healthy in both physiological and psychological conditions.

fitness is how much ability or work that body can do. Also, it depend on endurance, flexibility, strength and power of person. So, football and tennis and other sports need fit body.

Health is something internal including be away and free from diseases, happy spiritually, mentally ,psychologically and spiritually. On other hand, we can't say that they have to be together always for example, I'm fit , but I am not healthy. As a result of that the exercise that you need to be healthy is not as much of that needed to keep you fit.

If people want to be fit, they have to follow a structured training program such as, running , walking , weight training. But if people need to be healthy they don't have to do hard exercise.

Reducing risk heart disease, obesity and mental health problem, people need to be physical active by walking , cycling , using stairs instead of lift at work or building, reach to everything by their self , park their car far from supermarket.

Writing Feedback / "disadvantages than advantages of using a computer" - my summary - computer [NEW]

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Now a days the using of computer became reciprocal for all ages. Recently for several years , preschool children took percentage from proportion of how money users of company. However, it has disadvantages than advantages because of psychological , educational , social, and behavior.

basically, it says that preschool children don't have to set with computer inasmuch for healthy dangers for example , can cause eye injuries , obesity and repetitive stress injuries. Children have to set with people that around them to get healthy education and to build strong relation, to enhance creativity, and socialization process.

According to the report, U.S. spend about billions of dollars to provide computer technology for elementary school. Also, they reduced some teachers, mosaics and art programs , library books , field trips parks to make computers as a alternative for them. Almon, a former preschool teacher and U.S. coordinator for the organization said that he encourage parents and teachers to keep children to be away from computer, but for older children it is useful. Contrary to a statement of Alan Delamater, a child psychologist at the University of Miami , he saied that we can exploit computer in educational programs, and he encourage using it in early age because of modern life. Whereas parents have to control computers games.

On the other hand, I agree with using computer in only school but for only minutes to play educational games to be out of traditional education. Too, when children become older, the education requirements will require from them to use computers to develop their skills in using computer to be introduction to higher levels. Children have to use their creativity with pencil and papers instead of computer mouse because it can't read or feel what exactly they need and what are their ideas.