Writing Feedback / television shows many foreign - made programmes harmful or not ???? [2]

In many countries television shows many foreign - made programmes. The dominance of imported entertainment is harmful to the cultures of these countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology is increasing significantly day by day and everyday new things are invented. One of the most important inventions of 20th century is Television and it added a new dimension to our lives. It was the biggest invention that added new vistas in telecommunication field. Today TV and its show programs such as foreign - made programs play the main role in our country and it has many disadvantages of forming our culture or society because of that it is the one of the most used invention that is used in every place.

Nowadays millions of people have TV sets in their home and they get some information from all over the world. Each country has its own TV show programs, but in many countries there are many foreign - programs that are showing in channels. For example: In my country there is a show name is ``who wants to marry? `` is one of the other country`s program and most of the people especially old, unemployed, young girls who are not married and housewives watch this show very curiously, because first they are unemployed and second it is interesting for them who married , fight or get divorced with someone. But they do not know or understand that it is dangerous for them. These shows take the control of people mind and play with them how they want. On the other hand foreign countries people also watch this programs and they start to think about our cultures or traditions what they see on TV.

Even though TV programs also affect our young society, because of that they spend most of their daylight time watching TV and become under the influence of this shows. For example: There is a show called ``Cage`` in our TV`s channel. They took this program from Russian channel. In this show boys and girls come together and live in a house for several months. They did not go outside only stay in this house, fight or say incentive words each other and do some sexual behaviors. And our young children watch and be impacted from this shows, after that they are getting to form like what characters they see in TV programs.

As a conclusion television foreign - made programs have many disadvantages and for this government must not broadcast any such programs on TV channels if they are harmful for our society or culture. If you want your children to be a good member of our society you must take the control of your children.

Writing Feedback / The most significant transportation innovation of past 200 years? [2]

In your opinion, what has been the most significant transportation of the past 200 years?

Technology is increasing significantly day by day and everyday new things are inventing. One of the biggest inventions of 20th century is airplane and it added a new dimension in our lives. It was an important invention that opened new vistas in transportation for its security, convenient and faster delivering to any destination.

Nowadays millions of people all over the world travel different places with airplanes, because of that everyone want to reach to their destination as possibly as quick. For example: when I was travel to Turkey I chosen plane, so there was approximately 1000 miles between Baku and Istanbul cities and instead of traveling plane, it will take many hours to reach my destination with other transportation. However despite of passenger there are also cargo planes have, which they deliver any freights to any places fast. For this most of the people prefer plane transportation.

As you know that airplane is one of the most security and convenient transportation in the world. Today invention of technology is also effect to airplanes because planes are designed the latest security systems. And I think that this is the main reason for most of the people choose traveling or transporting their cargo with plane. Although convenient play the vital role in transportation and everyone wants to travel in a convenient transport. Thus planes have economy and business classes. In economy class passengers are provide with limited services but in business there are bars, saunas, sleeping rooms and etc. and it depends on your money which classes you want. Therefore planes are convenient transportation ever.

On the contrary plane is the one of the main transport in the world. I think that each transport has its own role in our life. If you travel any city or country I prefer you plane, because it is faster, convenient and safety for you in any case.

Writing Feedback / What kinds of places do you avoid visiting when you travel? [5]

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When do you enjoy going to wilderness destinations, or do you prefer visiting cities or some other kind of places?
What kinds of places do you avoid visiting when you travel?

Today travel comes much easier than ancient times. Millions of people all over the world travel to see other countries, continents or modern and old cities. Some people try to visit the cities or wilderness areas of countries, because of that it is so interesting to meet with different cultures, to discover new things, try a new life styles or different foods.

As you know that today many people travel different cities and the most of the visitors visit the capital cities because sightseeing places prevail than other cities of country. The museums, theaters, art galleries, shops, monuments, mosques and churches generally take place in the capital cities. In cities you will come with contact different cultures, peoples, different meals or foods. It will be easier to you if you know the culture of the country and you can easily be familiar with them. Visiting the historical places, museums, theaters, art galleries of the city give us information about the history of country or city. Entertainment, festivals, adventure, cuisine, education, health and business enhance our experience while travelling. People take the camera to take the picture of every interesting thing they see while traveling and they enjoy sharing photos with their relatives.

Although traveling is good for relaxing and clearing your mind and I think that visiting the wilderness areas are the best places for this. Because people who work hard during the year they are getting tried and more stressful, lose their energy and going to mountains, lakes, seas, valleys, plains, waterfalls, forests: different kinds of trees, flowers and plants; animals and birds give the positive energy and make us get of our stressful life. Listening the river flows sound, birds singing, flowers beauty, some interesting animals feels us cheerfully and much more convenient.

In a nutshell relaxation is one of the top reasons to travel and I think that each person must travel different countries and cities to gain more information and improve life experiences. It does not matter where it is city or wilderness area. Each place has its own beauty.

Writing Feedback / Home is the first school and parents are first teachers; good members of society [2]

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Nowadays parents and schools educate children and take them to the main role of formulating our society
Home is the first school and parents are first teachers of ours. Because during the childhood they teach us how to speak and behave to someone in society. Other way parents own behavior is also affect to their children and they get these easily while they are child. Then they are going to be formed how they see and hear. Subsequently children will show their experience to the others what they learn from their parents. That`s why parents must be careful while they are teaching their children because they are seriously responsible from their children.

Although school is the best place for the children to learn and to be o good person. At school they meet with many people and do their activities together with their classmates. Children can learn how to act and have a good attitude. Teachers, except teaching many subjects they also teach to the children how to have o good behavior with their friends, parents or neighborhoods. That`s why, parents always have a big hope from school to help them for creating their children to be o good person.

In my view I think that good parents are good teachers and both of them have their own role in our society.