Undergraduate / I will get to explore my talents and passion for culture and media; NYU [3]

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NYU's global network provides students with hundreds of academic areas of interest for students to cultivate their intellectual curiosity and to help achieve their career goals. Whether you are entirely undecided about your academic plans or you have a definitive program of study in mind, what are your own academic interests? Feel free to share any thoughts on any particular programs or how you might explore those interests at NYU on any of our campuses.

I vividly remember being so fascinated, sitting on the couch on my dad's lap and watching the news everyday with him. The issues and the way the new broadcasters were presenting just captivated me. Watching the news on my dad's lap became more than bonding time it became my own personal curiosity and interest. In search of my academic plans and looking for my career my mind kept on going back to the memories I have of watching the news with my dad. Choosing Media, Culture, and communication seems like the perfect decision. At NYU New York, the center of so many great Media and Communication realms is a place where I feel like I can pursue and cultivate my interests. I believe studying Media, Culture, and communication I will be able to expand my horizon and explore my career options in New York. I will get to explore my talents and passion for culture and media. As a result, I will find a place to practice my learned knowledge gained at NYU New York.

Tell us why you have chosen the above campus (using a maximum of 700 characters-spaces and punctuation included).
I have chosen the New York Campus because my preferred major, Media, Culture and communication, is only offered on the New York campus. New York campus has so many benefits being such a cultured city. I feel there is so much to discover in New York City the big lights, tall buildings, and people of all walks of life roaming the streets making it learning experience even outside the classroom. To me, there is no better place to study media then where so many creditable media stations are held and started. These are the reason I have chosen the New York Campus.

Undergraduate / I indulge in every piece of the performance; NYU Supp/ What intrigues you? [3]

What intrigues you? Tell us about one work of art, scientific achievement, piece of literature, method of communication, or place in the world (a film, book, performance, website, event, location, etc.), and explain its significance to you.

Being a devote music fan, I have faithfully watched tons of performances on YouTube. I indulge in every piece of the performance, the captivating lights, the elaborate stage, and the penetrating screams of the crowd. Then there is the elaborate set change from song to song and the dancer's fluid movement in unison making live performances so magnificent. Although, acoustic sets to me are the best. You can hear sincerity in every note and the clarity of every guitar strum. In my opinion, there is nothing more intriguing than how music can affect people map out their lives and express universal feelings. Music becomes a form of communication and when you watch a performer perform you almost feel like they have just shared a piece of themselves and their story. When an artist pours out their emotions into song music becomes powerful and it affects everyone listening. Great music and great entertainers shape their generation either in a positive or negative way. The reason this is all significant to me because music has inspired me. Music has the ability to captivate me and also had helped me believe in myself and that anything possible. All it takes is one person sharing a message through music to change lives.

Undergraduate / Being a devote Justin Bieber fan! NYU supplement [8]

What intrigues you? Tell us about one work of art, scientific achievement, piece of literature, method of communication, or place in the world (a film, book, performance, website, event, location, etc.), and explain its significance to you.

Being a devote Justin Bieber fan, I have faithfully watched over 100 of his performances on YouTube. I indulge every piece of the performance, the captivating lights, the elaborate stage, and the penetrating screams of the crowd. You can hear sincerity in every note, and the clarity of every guitar strum. To me, there is nothing more intriguing than how music can affect people and map out their lives and express universal feelings. Set changes for every song and each practiced and choreographed move of the dancers in unison is what makes live performances so magnificent. It fascinates me how such acts and performances come together and all the hard work put in to it to make the final production perfect. Although, acoustic sets to me are the best just Justin and his guitar you can hear his emotions in his voice. Music is powerful and when the artist pours out their emotion into a song it affects everyone listening. Great music and great entertainers shape their generation either in a positive or negative way. I think what makes this significant to me is its allure and the ability to captivate me and just get the best of me.