Writing Feedback / Why study? 'career preparation, gaining experiences, and increasing knowledge' [3]

People attend college or university for many reasons (for example, new experience, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays attending to college or university is one of the most important issues for juveniles. Seemingly, every youth has attended or wishes to attend to university. Doubtless, there are lots of advantages in participating to universities. It seems to me that, three arguments and advantages are highlighted in attending to university. Benefits such as career preparation, gaining experiences, and increasing knowledge have motivated youth to attend to university.

First reason for attending to university, in my point of view is career preparation. These days, there are lots of competitions among people for occupying certain jobs in job market. Having adequate job is a dream for everyone. In order to apply for the better jobs, people, try to make their resume stronger than others. In the marathon of getting jobs, who have studied in universities have more priority than uneducated one. As an instance, while my cousin was looking for a job for more than six months, my brother applied for the certain job and immediately started to work, because he was a university graduated. Entering university make us an expert, and more skillful. Therefore, we can occupy better jobs.

Second reason in my idea, is gaining experiences. Living alone, while studying, lead us to gain majestic experiences. Usually, adolescents rely on their family and without their supports will be disappointed. Living alone for the period of life might be useful or detrimental. In some periods such as during studying in university, being far from family is not only difficult for students but also a pretty useful chance for gaining various experiences. In this time span, students can gain experience for manage themselves in adult life.

The last reason that I believe motivates people to attend university is increasing knowledge. Human being has desire for learning more, and always tried for that. In addition, in today's world with the mass of information, in order to expanding communication with worldwide people, every day we have to know more than yesterday. Attending to university performs an opportunity for learning new matters, such as cultures, literatures, various cults, religions, and a variety of popular subjects. Therefore, I am sure one of the reasons of attending to university is having thirsty for absorbing new information.

From my point of view, people have three main reasons for joining to universities, which are gaining experiences, career preparation, and increasing knowledge. Today, people think they can obviate these needs by attending to university. Therefore, most of the young people or even Middle Ages are studying in universities or wish to study.

Writing Feedback / avoid routine; Dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students [2]

Topic 99: You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students. Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

One of the most important things for students in their student lives is their roommates. It is important because students have influence on each other and can learn or imitate each other's habits, behaviors, or even social manners. Some people are sensitive about their roommates and they themselves should find their roommates, on the other hand, some people, including me, are not concerned about their roommates and can live with everyone. With having the choice between choosing my own roommate and delegating it to university, I prefer to have it done by university. I believe that, in this condition, I will meet new people and also gain new experiences.

Main reason that I prefer to delegate the decision of choosing the roommate to university is meeting new people. If university distributes students in dorm rooms, a lot of students with different races and cultures will be roommate together and can get familiar with a variety of the cultures. As an instance, one of my friends studying in Sweden tells me about lots of cultural information which he has learned from his roommates who are from different nationalities such as Chinese, Russian, and Arabic. Therefore, I like to live with exotic person chosen for me by university as the roommate.

Another reason of supporting the selection of roommate by university is to prepare ourselves for entering society. Finishing university and entering society, I have to deal with people who might have each kind of personalities and behaviors. If I had an experience of living with different persons, I would easily understand everyone in my social life. In order to explain my experience in dormitory, when I were living with my roommates I found out that sometimes I should not persist on my attitude even if it be true because maybe others dislike and can't tolerate. This point helped me a lot in my real life and resulted in finding great opportunities for jobs.

In my opinion, delegating the task of choosing roommate to university is the best one. Because we meet new people, cultures, and we can gain experiences for adult lives. Dorm life is the best time for each student to experience new things and avoid routine days.

Writing Feedback / 'staying in touch' : Phones and E-mail have made communication less personal [6]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Telephones and E-mail have made communication between people less personal. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion?

Today communication is one of the most important issues in human life. people need to have relation with each other to be able to continue their life .there are several type of communication media for people for instance phone ,email, mobile , internet chat and even face to face interaction. In my view using some new method of communication like email and phone is not only harmful for human's relationship but also is very vital, because of two important reason.

The main reason is staying in touch. Today people because of working in their work place or study in university ,are distributed along the city or even country, so they have less face to face communication with their family or friends ,so phone and email solved this problem .For instance two years ago I studied in Berlin in Germany where was not my mother country so I just could call or send email to my family and friends because I did not have any other communication way, so I believe email and phone are very useful media in human life.

Another important argument is saving time and speed in email or phone call .most of the time people does not have enough time for visiting each other or maybe it is not possible to come or back to each other's city because of lack of time or money, but now they can use email or phone to interact and speak together .For example this year in Christmas I could not went to all of my friends house and congratulate them but with help of phone I called all of them in an hour and greet all of them without wasting any time or money for going from an place to another. So I found it email and phone are very useful in today's complex life.

In my opinion email and phone not only persisted against reducing personal relations but also increased it .How I mentioned staying in touch and communicating with a very little expense are the gift of email and telephone. Everyone for having constant interaction with family or friends have to use email and phone.

Writing Feedback / Do you agree or disagree ? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. [10]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays advertising is one of the most important things for each country and people whole the world, because with referring to ads we can become aware of many important aspects of each society and country, aspects such as peoples merits, concerns and also it shows whether people tend to be affluent .So I am certainly agree with this statement that advertisement helps us to know about a country.

By looking to each countries advertisement we can find out merits and values of society, advertisement can illustrate the importance of merits like environment, charity, health, education or religion on a country .For example in some countries advertising focused on charity and so televiewer can absorb it charity and helping poor are a merit on that country, as well as another country which value health or education.

Another important matter which can understand from ads is peoples concern and their desire in life .With noticing to tiny issues we can find out peoples wishes about freedom, success and improvement, for instance: suppose a automobile factory which designs a new car but we see advertising of that car in each country is vary, in some countries they show car driven in a beautiful highway or in shoreline , since that countries peoples concern is freedom ,in contrast in some countries that car shown near the pretty villa or as a car of success manager, due to peoples concern on these countries is success.

Last and very interesting thing can derive from ads is the peoples economic condition because the content of ads prepared for the average people of that country and shows their daily life. for example in Third World countries ads concentration is on food and nutrition as a result of poverty , conversely in Europe ads filled with a variety of cars , airlines and tours because of peoples welfare.

It seems to me advertisement is like a window onto the life of a country. We can learn a lot about a country with noticing to advertisement of that country because it shows peoples value, concern and their affluent in daily life.

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Writing Feedback / Listen to teachers or Get involved in discussing ; Type of CLASS I like [6]

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SUBJECT::::Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking. Which type of class do you prefer? Give specific reasons and details to support your choice

One of the most important things in teaching system is lecturing .In some school or universities just teachers lecture in class , on the other hand there are some schools or universities in which students can take part in class or do some of talking .I like second method because in that condition students can have interaction with each other or teacher and express their idea , also in this way students can concentrate on lessons much better and I believe this method raises students self confidence .

Main reason of choosing student and teacher lecturing system is interaction because in this system all of students can discuss with each other or teacher .in this condition all of students even week students can express their idea . Students can learn from each other and also teach each other so it cause to learning cooperation in studying and certainly in their life .

Additionally when students lecture in class and talk , they will be concentrated in subject and maybe talk about subject but if they just listen they won't focus on subject as much as possible . in fact strangeness of this method is that it can keep all of students attention in class.

Moreover with speaking in class students self confidence raises and they will be able to join to discussion and take part in class which learns them to be responsible to their duty and it can lead them to be a self confident person , finally students can be a successful person in society and surely in their personal life.

It seems to me studying in a class that both students and teacher can talk and lecture is more useful than other methods because with this technique students can learn from each other and cooperate and also they can concentrate on lessons better , therewith in this method students self confidence will be raised and it prepare them for entering to society.

Writing Feedback / For me meeting Lionel Messi is preferable than to come across other athletes [4]

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If you could meet a famous entertainer or athlete, who would that be, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

If I could meet a famous athlete certainly my choice would be lionel Messi .Messi is one of the most famous football players in the world .he is originally from Argentina but now lives in Spain and plays for Barcelona football team . I like to meet him because he has been world's best football player for several years , indeed he is world's most expensive football player and so rich.

Messi is genius football player ,he is creative and hardworking because of these he is able to obtain a lots of awards , awards like a variety of cups in several league with his teams , or several personal award's like being world's best football player and achieving "the Gold Ball" or achieving "the Golden Shoe" and many other merits .because of these every one admire him and me admire him too.

Furthermore he is most expensive football player in the world and it shows his value .I am convinced to meet world's most valuable athlete .it is unbelievable feel and I like experience it and ask him about keys of success .

It seems to me that meeting Lionel Messi is Preferable than other athletes .he is my favorite football player due to he is world's best football player and furthermore he is most valuable athlete in the world!