Writing Feedback / IELTS; Intelligent/ Humor/ Reliable - Which one of these you look in your friend? [2]

What do you want most in a friend someone who is intelligent or someone who has sense of humor or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristic is most important to you? Use reason and specific example to explain your choice.

Friend is most important companion in your life. All friends have different characteristic, some are very frank and some are very intelligent. Also someone has a sense of humor and reliable. So in my point of view, reliable friend is most important to me. Here I will explain my choice and give a good example.

Firstly, friend must be reliable. They must trust each other, from that we gain respect and love. Whether your friend is poor or rich and educated or uneducated. We should respect your friend and give lots of love. Be companion your friend forever, whether they are in sorrow or enjoy life.

As for me I met lots of friend and hangout with them tool, but dolman is my best friend forever. She is very intelligent and educated girl. The most important that she is reliable and very compassion. She is always being with me, when I am in problem or trouble. She support and care me as my sister.

Finally, I would to say that; friend is part of parcel in our life. So I believe that everybody love your friend like river and its flow forever and don't love your friend like flower. It will dies after season change. So be reliable and respectful friend .

Writing Feedback / Are we always doing things that we enjoy? IELTS [8]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reason and example to support you answer.

Yes I m agree this statement. Some people are going things that there are not enjoy doing. In this world they have verity of situation and it not mean what they are doing something that all are he or she had interested and enjoy to doing this. So here I have some reasons and examples for my agreement.

Firstly, in some country they have very concern and respect for their traditional.(hi friend i am not sure that its a traditional,) For example the young people must be accept for arrangement marriage, but in the modern life most of young people are not interest and enjoy for this kind of marriage and they want their choice. That is parents demand and forces to do that. That life is not perfect and some in cause young people are suicide them self.

Secondly, in some business family they have rule like that. If father of their family is dead or sick. The first son will take care all the response the family matter and take their business. But son don't interest in business and his major subject is others and not related to the business. Then that is their rule and must be follow it.

Thirdly, in the school some of students not interest and willing to do study but that is parents force to do it and they thought that without education we cannot job in future. but its like wasting their time and money spending on children.

In finally I would to like to say that. Everybody wants to do what they want or wish to do. But in this circumstance is very hard to do and some things we must be follow the rule of traditional and parents orders. So this is some people are doing something is not enjoy doing.

P.s hi friend i m not sure that in my first reason is traditional or not. thank you for your help....

Writing Feedback / Start work Early Morning or Work till late night? IELTS [7]

Some people are get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the say and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reason and examples....

Everybody have different habit and hoppy as characteristic. So some people are very happy to get up early in the morning and very fresh up to doing work and some people are happy to sleep in the morning and doing late work at night, because of they are very hard to wake up at morning. So mean is we need work prefect and presently and comfortable for your day to day life.

So for me as I like to wake up early in the morning but I am not wake up every early morning. Sometime I wake up late and I stay late night for finished my work. When I wake up early morning I am happy to go walk with my dog. They have very fresh air as very quite as give me peace mind. On that morning I m very exciting to learn or do something. Its give me new energy to my ability. So I learn something in this morning that keeps long last in my mind. Also I want think positive and want to help for other people.

On other hand they is big advantage for me as I m satisfy what did on that day with enjoyful mood. When I finished my early and I use my time to go watch and party with friends. I want give my mind for rest and at night I used to write a diary , then I sleep at 10pm. This is my rest night and working day.

Sometime I wake up at late as I stay at late night and I want try to finished my work or I want play with my friends or watched movie at late night. It's very hard to wake up early morning, on that morning my body has no energy to do work and no attention to anything just wants sleep.

Here I what I am trying to say that we should be think about you health and best way is wake up early in the morning. Morning air very pure and quite environment to us. They Is no noise or air pollution .