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Name: Shafiq Gichki
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Last Post: Mar 14, 2014
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Gichki   
Mar 14, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS;Popular events are essential in easing international tension [3]

Task:
Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Answer:
After every four years, the world joins together to watch international sporting events such as, Football World Cup and Olympics. Certain events have always proved to be very effective in easing international tension and meanwhile releasing patriotic emotions. I strongly agree with this idea.

In today's world , the world leaders are fighting for power and economy, which has led to emerging new issues and cross terrestrial tensions among different countries. In such a scenario sporting events such as, Olympics , makes them able enough to forget all these differences and provide them with an unbiased platform for easing international tension. The five rings in Olympics symbol indicates the unity of the five continents. Athletes and sportsmen from different countries forget all the distinctions and enthusiastically participate in this mega sporting event. Even sportsmen from Palestine and Israel also take part in this event. This clearly shows how sports has been very useful in easing international tension.

Similarly, international sporting events have been very important in releasing patriotic spirits. In certain mega events, the countrymen are found carrying their flag and forgetting all the other tightness, cheering, praying and hoping for the win of their country. For example, in Brazil , joblessness and poverty is on its brisk but during the football world cup , all these shortcomings of the government are placed aside . Patriotic spirits and real love for the country emerges on the faces of the people. Even social evils are reduced to a certain degree during mega sporting events.

Therefore, it is concluded that popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way..
Gichki   
Mar 11, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS - HAPPINESS; Why it is difficult to define and What factors contribute to achieving? [3]

Task: Happiness is considered very important in life
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important to achieving happiness?
During this unpredictable journey of life man comes across various emotions which directly or indirectly influence his personality.Among these emotions happiness is what everybody wants and is very important in life.As it is said that happy people live longer. Defining happiness is actually very difficult because it varies in individuals with different backgrounds.

A variety of psychological, religious and philosophical approaches have strained to define happiness and its sources because of the diversity of this feeling in different people. Happiness actually is a mental or spiritual feeling. The mental feeling of human is very complex because it varies from person to person. For example, something or a course of action can be a cause of happiness for one person but this may bring sorrows for other person. Even a person himself sometimes comes across a certain mental state that he cannot judge whether he is happy or sad. For a sick person, health is what brings joy in his life. For a wretched person, wealth is main cause of happiness in his life, so and so forth. This diversity of human feelings make it difficult to understand the actuality of happiness.

Everyone in this world is working day and night to achieve happiness. Achieving happiness is not as difficult as defining happiness. In order to be happy in this life we should be grateful to what we have i.e. health, wealth,family etc. If we are thankful then minor things can make us happy. We should define our goals and work hard to achieve our goals. Spiritual satisfaction can on be attained if we are very much close to nature and understand what nature wants from us. A person who is spiritually satisfied is the happiest man on the earth. Be ambitious but don not be over ambitious because this world is not a wish granting factory as Nicholas Spark said.

To sum up, defining happiness is the toughest ask but being happy is all in your hands which can be achieved by being grateful to what you have and being close to nature.
Gichki   
Mar 11, 2014
Writing Feedback / Priority: The happiness of the majority vs the rights of individuals? [3]

Nevertheless, society, itself, can help you forget all your woes and makes you happy (not make you happy),,,,,, if you help to others enough to get theirs... i think it should be..if you help others enough to get others.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Gichki   
Mar 10, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS; Who should pay tuition fees for adults who are interested in university studies? [5]

Task: Many people think that the government should pay the tuition fees for all adults who are interested in university studies. Do you agree or disagree?

Education is very crucial for every human being. Most emphasis is given to acquiring education and even it is said that for seeking knowledge you should not avoid going to any part of the world. Various international organizations are working hard to provide higher education to the people of under privileged countries. This is education which plays a vital role for the mental grooming of people and making them able enough to differentiate right from wrong.

Statistics shows that not all the students who have studied till intermediate level get enough opportunities to further continue their studies. In Africa up to 20% of the students cannot carry on their studies. This is due to lack of facilities or the economic condition does not allow them to further continue their studies. And such students are forced by their luck to leave their studies incomplete and tolerate hardships to earn a living. I strongly recommend the government should pay intensive attention to provide the tuition fees of such students who are will to study but cannot due to lack of opportunities.

Higher education is not affordable by all the adults. The government should provide them with various opportunities ,like,scholarships , so that they can complete there education and in return they will serve their nation in a better way. The developed nations of the world pay intensive care for promoting higher education. That is why they have developed in every field. Even the government should provide them with overseas scholarships so that they seek education from a well educated nation and in return play a vital role for the development of the country.

Therefore, it is concluded that the government should do its best to provide all the facilities along with the tuition fees to the adult students in order to promote higher education.And in return the result will always be fruitful.
Gichki   
Mar 10, 2014
Writing Feedback / Priority: Industrial skills vs Education? [5]

The priority of education over the industry is the only way to welfare comprehensively... it should be'' The priority of education over industry is the only way to benefit comprehensively''..

promoting industry is the fastest way to economical prosper not prosperity...
Gichki   
Mar 10, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS - Negative effects of Globalization [3]

Task: Even thought Globalization affects the world's economics in a very positive way, its negative sides should not be forgotten. Discuss.

With the technological advancements the world has been transformed into a global village. Everybody is connected with one another by a technological mean, which has made interaction easier. Globalization has made economies to bloom in a positive way. It has also proved to be fruitful in many ways. It also has some negative impacts which are worth discussing.

Globalization has provided us the means to interact with one another but, unfortunately we have been so much involved that we are day by day moving away from our culture, norms and values. There is interaction among people by technological means but there is no connection of care, humanity and love and we are moving away from our loved ones. The culture gives more emphasis on the humanity, love and care in particular and this is what mankind needs more.

Nobody can ever deny the positive impacts of Globalization but mean while, it has also helped the terrorists and criminals to plan deadly attacks. The 9/11 attack clearly signifies how it was done. It has also helped in transportation of some deadliest diseases such as, AIDS, which entered America from Africa. Environmental degradation is also considered one of the factors of Globalization.

Therefore it is concluded that Globalization has its own importance and it has played a vital role for the economical and political uplift of different nations. Therefore the strategy should be to find the solution to the threats that have been caused by Globalization, so that we can work towards a brighter future for mankind.
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