Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK1; The consequence of a survey of grown up person education [5]

Given charts below illustrate the consequence of a survey of grown up
person education. The first bar chart gives reasons of study decision
which is done by adult students, while the second chart shows people
opinion regarding how payments of adult education should be shared.

It is clear from the bar chart that more significant reasons of adult
education are interest in subjects and to obtain qualifications which are
highest percentages taken by them.

According to the chart, 40 % of adults decided to study,because they
are interested in subjects, while second reason is very close to first
reason with 38% which students want to gain qualification. Next three
reasons get very similar percentages to each other from 20 to 22%. The
other reason is able to change jobs get 12%. Interestingly, few adults
decide to study to meet people with about less than 10 percent, more
specifically 9 percent.

The pie chart shows, thе cost of taxpayer course should be shared 25%, while employer course 35%. Largest part of pie chart taken by
individual course which should be shared 40%.

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Writing Feedback / expenditure on fast food by income groups and consumption of fast food (1970-1990) [2]

The bar chart illustrates the information about spending money per week on fast food by Britons, while the graph shows consuming Hamburgers, fish and chips and Pizza in Britain between 1970 and 1990. Looking at first chart below, there are given three groups of income on pence each person per week and in the second graph, there are given data regarding three types of fast food grammes during a period of 20 years.

according to the information, in high income and average income, more consumers probably ate hamburgers, while there was an increase of 25-pence expending for consuming fish & chips. In the low income group, pizza was decreased about 8 pence of expenditure and this spending was smaller than fish and chips, while were slightly larger than hamburgers about 15 pence per week.

Looking at the line graph, it Illustrates both hamburgers and Pizza that increased steadily to about 300 grammes during more than 15 years period, while there were slight decrease on fish and chips from 300 grammes to closely 200 grammes between the same periods. After late 1980s, hamburgers increased dramatically over 500 grammes. At the end of the year in this graph, hamburger and pizza rose notably, while fish and chips continued to rise slightly about 200 grammes.

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Writing Feedback / Australian bureau of meteorology collects up to the minute data on the weather [4]

The figure provided below Illustrates the process used by Australian Bureau of meteorology to forecast the weather.
There are four stages in the process, beginning with the collection of the data regarding the weather. This Information is then anaylesed, prepared to presentation, and finally broadcast to the public.

Looking at the first and second stages of process, there are the ways of gathering information and three ways of analysing it. Firstly, incoming data can be received by satellite and presented four analysing as a satellite photo. The same data can be passed to a radar station and presented on a radar screen or synoptic chart. Secondly, incoming information may be collected directly radar station and analysed on a synoptic chart.

At the the third stage of the process, the weather broadcast is prepared on the computers. Finally, all Information is delivered to the public on television, on the radio or as a recorded telephone announcement.