Letters / I believe that my undergraduate studies have set the foundations for a successful Master [2]

On the one hand, I was delighted to read about the University's Problem Based Learning system which I found that entirely suits my learning habits and, on the other hand, I'm keen to experience the international atmosphere at X University and to be able to connect it to my studies.

I chose to pursue a career in engineering because I have always been interested in structure( I think you meant constructing or if you meant buildings you should write structures), geometry,

Early on in ( you must write neither on or in) secondary education subjects like Physics, Mathematics and Informatics

The faculty I chose was X because it is the best combination of my passion for theoretical Physics with practical application in Informatics.

I learned a lot of interesting concepts about processes, structure and operations of the National Power System.

This experience helped me to realize what I really want, which is to further development of my studies abroad, where I could interact and work with students coming from different cultures and backgrounds.

I am certain that studying two years at X University will be a great opportunity to gain solid knowledge as well asalso valuable expertise ( Did you mean expertise or experience ?)

which are living examples of the art of electrical energy systems, and, secondly, to continue a process of lifelong learning in the field of X.

Scholarship / Not Going to Give Up - I gave it my all, and my honesty, whatever happens, happens. Scholarship [4]

It has been about three weeks of deleting and rewriting,
The context I gave grown up in taught me that there are a lot of teen moms and drug dealers
I recieved "C" after "C" after "C" ( I think triple after "C" is overdoing)
I am the cashier, as well, as the clothes folder/washer, and night cleaning staff.
might not be the best of Questbridge applicants, but I do have my undying optimism.(can you tell me what it means? I didn't understand)

Writing Feedback / I remember my father's existence in our house since I was born. Describe a person essay. [4]

I remember him becoming too critical and judgemental

Writing Feedback / Computers have made the world a better place to live. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? [6]

Thank you for your suggestions:)
in live routine i meant our simple daily order like breakfast, work or school, then again home and so on. It's just general view of our life

Research Papers / The impact of sunscreen - what it does after it goes into the ocean? [3]

Therefore , people have to fight against with fierce ultraviolets ( I think you should writehowever instead of therefore)
people's skin will have to suffer the pain ofdue to sunburn that is hurts, itchs and inflames.
sunscreen is linked with skin cancer because it containswith ingredients,
Even so ( I think you wanted to write even though ), its ingredients cause the coastal pollution.
she mentioned that the studies in Switzerland found two chemical ingredients that are spread in cosmetic products are inside the body of fishes.

Writing Feedback / People can eat different types of food effortlessly without any difficulties in preparing it. [3]

However, they have to (I prefer should instead of have to or must , because this is more polite expression) do physical activities even though kitchen machines are much more practical.

Letters / The internship in the Human Resources section opens wide opportunities for me [3]

Ability to keep informational confidential ( you should write: ability to keep informational confidentiality or ability to keep information confidential )
Being a leader is to influencing others to attain goals.
means that the person needs to
motivate

I hope I could help you:)

Writing Feedback / People's activities have been changed as the way of serving food becomes an instant. [3]

it does not need too long time for its preparation
fast food can harm the human bodyhealth
affects to people lifestyle.
use advanced technology to help themthemselves
While in the past to make this dish some people needYou wrote "in the past". After this You must write needed or just remove this sentence

By using the presto cooking tools it help the chef to reduce time for processing the bandeng bones becoming able to eat, namely presto process.With presto cooking tools chef can reduce the time needed to cook this dish and it is called "presto process"

However, changed our behaviour to eat fast food is not always good for our life. getting used to eat fast food can affect our health

It is difficult for many cooker in nowadays cook some food without using monosodium glutamate in order to become more delicious whereas this substance brings many drawbacks to our life. Such as to make slow the children development, to create damage to our brain, and to make many a person become an obesity and cancer disease.In our days it is difficult for cookers to cook meals without for example monosodium glutamate, because it gives dish better taste. Thus, this product has some drawbacks such as retardation in children development and obesity

many people still use it sincebecause this flavour can give delicious taste to fast food.
however the people understand that it contains many poisonharmfulsubstance causing some illnessthat can be cause of healt problems
Hi niddumakhi) You should learn express your thoughts clearer. You can reach this with practise. Also you should at least reduce grammar mistakes. mostly grammar mistakes were corrected. You should avoid repetition! I'll be happy if my suggestions are useful:)