Writing Feedback / Public transportation makes that less exhausts are ejected from motorbikes and cars into the air [2]

Topic: in about 140 words, write a paragraph about the advantages of using public transportation

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Nowadays, there are many means of transportation, but using public transportation has a lot of advantages. The first benefit of it is the reduction in the air pollution. The reason for that is the exhaust ejected from motorbikes and cars will be lessened. For example, going to school by bike is good for both the environment and your health. Secondly, one of the positive effects of using public transports is diminishing the traffic accidents. For instance, using bus to go to work is safer than travelling by motorbikes and cars. In addition, it is clear that using public transportation mean saving money. By going to work by underground, you can save money for some plans such as: going on picnic, going shopping,... In conclusion, there are many helpful influences on our life if we use public transportations

Writing Feedback / Write a paragraph of 140 words about the sport you like most [3]

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Of all the sports I know, I like football most. The reason why I like it is the clever cooperation among players. When I was a child, my father taught me to play soccer by letting me kick a ball into the goal. At the present, I usually play football with my friends at weekends. Sometimes I play football with my brother after leaving school to take it easy. It is the fact that playing soccer is a way of exercising and relaxing efficiently. Not only do I like to play it but I also enjoy watching football shows and football matches. I am really addicted to it. Moreover, I am a fan of Manchester United. To sum up, soccer is the most interesting sport I extremely love.