Writing Feedback / IT IS MORE IMPORTANT TO WORK AT A JOB THAT YOU ENJOY THAN IT IS TO EARN A LOT OF MONEY. [4]

TOEFL:It is More Important to Work at a Job that You Enjoy than it's to Earn a Lot of Money HOW MUCH WILL I SCORE IF I WRITE THIS WAY?

A golden key can open any door is rightly said. Money open any doors. But can money buy happiness? The joy we get when we do something of our interest cannot be bought by just few paper notes. So whether preferring money over happiness is justified or not is a contentious issue. A stand can only be taken after a scrupulous analysis.

Our lust for comfort in future is the biggest thief in our life. All of us run behind sumptuous life. Eventually we might get all of it but are we happy? The answer is always within us. The immense pleasure that we get after doing things we love is amazing. Do things you enjoy is a simple line but with guaranteed felicity.

Let me refer to an anecdote here. My brother was doing a job at Multinational Company before few years and earned big fat money. I realized he wasn't happy at the end. I used to wonder why after earning so much also, he wasn't happy. Soon I got my answer to it; he was not satisfied with his job. He always wanted to be a writer. After his saturation point, he drops his job for jollity he gets in writing. He chooses his passion over money. Though he dint earn much, he always wore smile on his face. I must say enjoyment in work is must for a good life.

It is possible that money can exhort us to do any job, as that money can fulfill our loved one's wishes. Sometimes people sacrifice their own happiness to bring pleasure to their loved ones. But just think of it what about when they will come the truth that all this is happening after you compromise your happiness. Will they be happy now?

For the aforementioned reasons, it is more important to work at a job that you enjoy than to run behind money. Money is not the solution to everything. Job that you enjoy doing is the real happiness. Money over happiness? Transient pleasure. Happiness over money? Perpetual joy. Choose wisely.

Writing Feedback / "Time flies". So grab all the moments you can within the time. Indeed college years are the best. [6]

TOEFL: THE COLLEGE YEARS ARE THE BEST TIME IN A PERSON'S LIFE. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS

Someone has rightly said, "Time flies". So grab all the moments you can within the time. College years too pass soon and leave a vestige on us for lifetime. I agree with the statement that indeed college years are the best. It teaches us many valuable lessons, can make new friends and base to face the life ahead.

An experience of an educational tour for 4 years teaches us many valuable lessons. College do not only teaches us the bookish knowledge but endows us with myriads of priceless lessons. I bet these lessons are fresh in your mind. It directs you on the right path to your destination.

Elementary school: 30 friends, Middle school: 20 friends, High school: 10 friends and College: 3 real friends. College gives us the opportunity to interact with new people. During college life we make friends for lifetime. They hold on to us and make us relive those special moments. Best thing ever happened to me in college was that I met Sam and Julie. They are still alive in my memory and we often meet.

Including valuable lessons and making new friends, college supply a base for us to face the upcoming life. It makes us experience some harsh situations to build our inner strength to enter into the real world. All of these things assist us to grow and it remains with us forever. No doubt that we are enamored of college life.

Eventually, college years are the best years of one's life as it endows us with lessons, friends and inner-strength to face the real world. Twelve years of school and four more years of college, then you work out till you die. SO GO LIVE YOUR FOUR YEARS! DON'T YOU MISS THEM!

Graduate / Longer time exams preparing is preferable to secure higher scores - more occasions for revisions [5]

BEFORE AN IMPORTANT EXAM, DO YOU THINK IT IS BETTER TO PREPARE FOR A LONG TIME OR ONLY FOR A FEW DAYS?

Studying before an important exam for long provides a room for revision. Students like me need two times revision before appearing for an examination. I usually forget what I study, so I need a revision. If you study at least two months before, you can easily revise it two times before exams.

Higher score possibility. Parents always expect good scores from us. Stern studies and proper revision results to good scores. So, if u start studying before long time, you can live up to your parent's expectations with good scores. And who doesn't wish to get good scores?

Better accuracy. While writing exam, it often happens that u black out. It normally happens when you study at last moment and you need to remember that long hassle syllabus in a short time. I usually start my studies from long back which gives me more accuracy and peace to my mind. As all day work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. I guess you do not wish to be one.

From the aforementioned reasons, I sum up that studying for a long time before exams is preferable to secure higher scores, to get done with revisions and achieve better accuracy. Would you as a student not like to live up to your parent's expectations? Go get started with your studies!