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Sep 22, 2016
Writing Feedback / Should students study in the single-sex schools in order to perform better academically [3]
halo Rafael,here are my thoughts for your essay:
It is said that students should study in the single-sex schools in order to perform better academically, however, I agree withI am more likely to tend to agree with the view(notion, statement) that it would be better for teenagers to study in mixed school.
It is true that there are several advantages for students to study in the single-sex schools.
Firstly,one of the benefits of student in the single-sex schools is students could concentrate on the courses and learning. They would not be interrupted by some gender issues.
For example, my high school was a single-sex school. And I had less chances to talk with girls at that time.
But Ididn'tdid not feel anything wrong about it, instead I felt quite rather comfortable to get alongwith my classmates.
Besides, I could spend most of the time on my study and hobbies.
Secondly , another advantage is there would be less gender problems in single-sex schools.
Boys and girls are different by nature.
Separating them in single-sex schools prevents some gender issues, such as sex harassment or conflicts between them, which would deter students from focusing on their learning.
halo Rafael,here are my thoughts for your essay:
It is said that students should study in the single-sex schools in order to perform better academically, however, I agree withI am more likely to tend to agree with the view(notion, statement) that it would be better for teenagers to study in mixed school.
Firstly,one of the benefits of student in the single-sex schools is students could concentrate on the courses and learning. They would not be interrupted by some gender issues.
For example, my high school was a single-sex school. And I had less chances to talk with girls at that time.
But Ididn'tdid not feel anything wrong about it, instead I felt quite rather comfortable to get along
Besides, I could spend most of the time on my study and hobbies.
Secondly , another advantage is there would be less gender problems in single-sex schools.
Boys and girls are different by nature.
Separating them in single-sex schools prevents some gender issues, such as sex harassment or conflicts between them, which would deter students from focusing on their learning.