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Posts by elasyari93 [Suspended]
Name: Abul Hasan
Joined: Sep 22, 2016
Last Post: Oct 10, 2016
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elasyari93   
Oct 10, 2016
Writing Feedback / Environmental Impacts of Logging; most industries use crates and paper bags as their shipping [2]

It is generally known that the logging companies has various negative impacts to the environment because most industries use crates and paper bags as their shipping. It can be globally seen from the rainforests of Central Africa, Southeast Asia, and South America to the northern forests of Canada and Scandivania in which there are amount of damage occurred in those areas such as habitat loss, pollution, and climate change. Furthermore, the logging effects spread widely into the felling of a swath of trees. Consequently, both terrestrial and aquatic lives are becoming endangered because nutrients, water, and shelter for plants, animals and microorganisms in every ecosystem are lost.

Trees has an essential role to protect the soil beneath; therefore, tree loss can change its integrity. For instance, the rainforest floor, place to myriad plant life, has significant benefits to support a dense canopy of branches and leaves preventing surface runoff. Tree roots are also utilized to stabilize the soil and prevent erosion. In logging, road building is a crucial factor which can damage the soil as it can create furrows the water and disrupt the underground water flow. In aquatic habitats, both vegetation and steam banks can block the entry of soil and other residue in order to keep a steady water flow owing to logging. However, removing trees can cause oxygen reduction in the water, killing fish, and other lives.

On the other hand, trees contribute to protect against air pollution through their leaves filtering pollutants from the air. They create moisture from the soil to the atmosphere causing deforestation in which it can lead to flooding, drought, and forest fires. In deforestation, approximately one-fifth of carbon dioxide emissions around the world causes climate change. Some logging industries burn a number of forests in order to access one area producing more carbon dioxide. In general, as an important natural resource, forests have an amount of biodiversity and irreplaceable wildlife habitats which should be protected for future generations.
elasyari93   
Oct 10, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary: The logging industry stocks the incomplete materials products [3]

Hello @Afdhel, I got some suggestions for your writing.

Directly, The(the) harm produces the ...

.., and small mammals leaning(leans) toward a thick canopy of boughs and foliages (foliage /uncountable) to keep it ...

... drip down slowly and can be reserved by the earth.
elasyari93   
Sep 22, 2016
Writing Feedback / (TED) What Islam Really Says About Women: Alaa Murabit [3]

In globalized era, women's participation is still in questionable for all aspects due to their capabilities. In this TED's video, Alaa Murabit gives her perspective about women's roles in Islam. As a young Libyan Muslim woman, she really proud of her faith. She said that nowadays religious institutions are dominated by men and only driven by male leadership. So, where is women's dedication? In Islam, Khodijah is a woman's leader in politic, economic and military. From Alaa Murabit point of view, "why were not we learning about her? Why we are not equal in the eyes of men if we are equal in the eyes of God?" Women can take their participation in several aspects more than before. They are able to be a decision maker who involve in empowering the other women. They are a foundation while it is broken, we cannot built a strong power.
elasyari93   
Sep 22, 2016
Writing Feedback / Advantages of having tattoos - they may increase your chance of working [4]

Hello @fira28, I got some advice for your writing. Hope, it can help you ..

Tattoos is an art that lies in the body and makes thea person using tattoos look like a museum (what do you mean about museum?) .

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elasyari93   
Sep 22, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary of TED fusion is energy's future (Steve Cowley) [7]

Hello @ifan21, I got some advice for your writing.

Here my suggestion:

1. One of the crucial problems nowadays is E nergy crisis and greenhouse effect.

2. ... by non-renewable energy resources such as coal, oil, gas etc ...

3. Hence, according to Steve Cowley, the United Kingdom Physicist, we have to pay ...
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