Ysalah
Nov 6, 2016
Scholarship / I am a member of many multinational groups - Network skills essay for Chevening [3]
I took your notice and redraft the 2 points,Is it better now? :
# The good network can result in fruitful work, for instance,in the first year at university,I was introduced to a senior student named Othman.Then,he informed me about Nubian Association at the College of Pharmacy and the need to activate its work
# When I came to work in Saudi Arabia, I stayed for months seeking for a job.At that time,one advice from my father benefited me that I have to broaden my network in Saudi to ease the finding job. Actually, I contacted Dr.Yahia who is Senior Pharmacist in Pharmacy Store at Saad Specialist Hospital.He offered to take my resume to apply for a job in the same place he works. Two weeks after, I received a call for an interview from the hospital.The interview was successful and I joined the hospital. This helped me build my own network
I took your notice and redraft the 2 points,Is it better now? :
# The good network can result in fruitful work, for instance,in the first year at university,I was introduced to a senior student named Othman.Then,he informed me about Nubian Association at the College of Pharmacy and the need to activate its work
# When I came to work in Saudi Arabia, I stayed for months seeking for a job.At that time,one advice from my father benefited me that I have to broaden my network in Saudi to ease the finding job. Actually, I contacted Dr.Yahia who is Senior Pharmacist in Pharmacy Store at Saad Specialist Hospital.He offered to take my resume to apply for a job in the same place he works. Two weeks after, I received a call for an interview from the hospital.The interview was successful and I joined the hospital. This helped me build my own network