Dear Hiring Manager:
I am writing to express my interest in the Customer Service Representative position at the XXX Bank.
As a student currently pursuing a Bachelor of Commerce at the XXX School of Business, I have built a strong business foundation and have learned how to diversify and challenge myself to overcome many obstacles. My passion for finance continues to grow and I know that the wonderful opportunity at XXX will act as a stepping stone for my career.
While working as a banquet server at the XXX Country Club, I gained valuable experience of being able to work in a fast-paced environment while performing several important duties simultaneously. Additionally, I identified and assessed each customer's needs and to the best of my ability, I helped them leave with a smile. Providing excellent customer service is vital in banking and that is precisely what I will offer when I get hired by XXX.
Throughout my year as the coordinator of the Graduation Clothing Committee, I scrutinized each payment to ensure accuracy and reliability, surveyed our graduation class to calculate the expected demand, and ordered in bulk to minimize costs. We greatly exceeded our goals, and my contributions helped raise $1,100 in funds for our charity. This unique experience instilled in me the confidence that my monetary experience, interpersonal skills and goal-oriented mindset will be an asset to your branch.
As a passionate and dedicated candidate, I welcome the opportunity to meet with you to discuss how my education, experience and skills would be beneficial for CIBC. Please feel free to contact me any time at (XXX)-XXX-XXXX in order to plan a meeting time that will best suit your timetable. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
XXX
Any feedback will be much appreciated. Thanks everyone!
I am writing to express my interest in the Customer Service Representative position at the XXX Bank.
As a student currently pursuing a Bachelor of Commerce at the XXX School of Business, I have built a strong business foundation and have learned how to diversify and challenge myself to overcome many obstacles. My passion for finance continues to grow and I know that the wonderful opportunity at XXX will act as a stepping stone for my career.
While working as a banquet server at the XXX Country Club, I gained valuable experience of being able to work in a fast-paced environment while performing several important duties simultaneously. Additionally, I identified and assessed each customer's needs and to the best of my ability, I helped them leave with a smile. Providing excellent customer service is vital in banking and that is precisely what I will offer when I get hired by XXX.
Throughout my year as the coordinator of the Graduation Clothing Committee, I scrutinized each payment to ensure accuracy and reliability, surveyed our graduation class to calculate the expected demand, and ordered in bulk to minimize costs. We greatly exceeded our goals, and my contributions helped raise $1,100 in funds for our charity. This unique experience instilled in me the confidence that my monetary experience, interpersonal skills and goal-oriented mindset will be an asset to your branch.
As a passionate and dedicated candidate, I welcome the opportunity to meet with you to discuss how my education, experience and skills would be beneficial for CIBC. Please feel free to contact me any time at (XXX)-XXX-XXXX in order to plan a meeting time that will best suit your timetable. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
XXX
Any feedback will be much appreciated. Thanks everyone!
