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International arbitration and environmental law - Motivation letter for master admission



Leila321 2 / 1  
Apr 20, 2024   #1
Dear Admissions Committee,
I am thrilled to apply for the Alternative Dispute Resolution program at Vienna University in Austria, a decision inspired by a lifelong passion for law and justice and influenced by pivotal experiences that have shaped my understanding and commitment to this noble field. This initiative serves as a guiding light for fostering global connections and promoting cross-cultural engagement, encapsulating the very ideals I am enthusiastic about embracing and furthering in my career.

Growing up in India, a country rich in cultural diversity and legal challenges, I was drawn to the complexities of law early on. My experience at ABC Law Company, where I contributed to our recognition in the Legal 500, and my thesis work at Panchab University on international commercial arbitral awards have highlighted significant gaps in our legal framework. This case was a pivotal study point, as it showcased the complexities and challenges faced within our judicial system regarding international arbitration agreements. My research highlighted a significant gap in the Indian's courts' approach to international arbitration, particularly evident in their initial refusal to recognize and enforce an award decreed by the Singapoure Arbitration Council.

One of my most challenging and rewarding experiences was my participation in the Arbitration Trial Competition. This was not only a pivotal professional engagement but also a profound personal revelation. It was during this competition that I first truly grasped the depth and significance of arbitration as a field. The process of preparing and presenting arguments on complex international legal issues provided my first real insight into the arbitration world, sparking a passion that has guided my career choices ever since. Leading our team to the national rounds for the first time was not only a testament to our dedication and skill but also a personal milestone that solidified my interest in pursuing arbitration as a specialty.

My involvement in the European Union-funded Alternative Dispute Resolution Project was particularly impactful. I provided legal aid to over 670 clients in 2021, a 40% increase from previous years. At Panchab University, I seized every opportunity to enhance my legal skills. Participating in the 1st International Summer School on Arbitration allowed me to refine my public speaking and leadership abilities. My profound commitment to international arbitration began when I decided to attend the Warsaw Arbitration Conference, a pivotal step requiring a bank loan taken without my parents' support. At the summit, I met Adam White, whose insights into international law deepened my understanding and enthusiasm for the field. Seeing my keen interest, White suggested that my background and aspirations made me an ideal candidate for the Alternative Dispute Resolution program at Vienna University, describing it as a rigorous blend of theory and practice perfect for someone with my background. White's recommendation and an enlightening article by George Felix on international law further inspired me.

This experience solidified my ambition to become a pioneer in arbitration, capable of bridging global cultural and legal divides and contributing significantly to the field. I am currently advancing my studies at Rome University, focusing on a thesis that delves into environmental regulations, corporate responsibility, and international investment law. This work highlights the importance of advanced legal education in tackling complex global issues, providing

insights into the dynamics of investor-state dispute resolution and the need for expert mediation between corporate and indigenous interests. At Vienna, I aim to expand this research to explore broader aspects of international dispute resolution mechanisms, including the pivotal issues of universal jurisdiction.

Motivated to deepen my understanding of international arbitration and environmental law, I aim to enhance my contributions to global sustainability and justice. My decision to pursue further studies at Vienna University is driven by their renowned international law program, which aligns with my career goals and academic pursuits in alternative dispute resolution.

Vienna's rigorous and progressive curriculum will enable me to engage with leading scholars and peers in discussions that challenge and advance legal practices. Thank you for considering my application, and for the potential to play a part in this exciting and important field. I am enthusiastic about the opportunity to immerse myself in this distinguished program and contribute to and grow within this vibrant academic community

Sincerely,

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15439  
Apr 21, 2024   #2
What you have written is a personal statement. There is very little motivation focus in the letter so this cannot be considered a real motivational explanation essay. Applicants often mistake a motivational letter for a personal statement, which is what you accidentally did in this presentation. So you cannot use this as a motivational letter. When writing a motivational letter, you should focus on the following information, unless otherwise specified:

1. Your current career status.
2. What you feel you can improve in your career and why.
3. How you see this course improving your handling of your workplace situation.
4. Why you are motivated to study in the school and the country.

Once you address these 4 main discussion concepts, you will have a better directed motivational letter.


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