Motivation letter for Glion; my interest in studying MBA program in GIHE

Hi guys,
I'm, writing a motivation letter to apply for MBA in Glion.
Please read and help me to correct my mistakes.
Thanks a lot!

MOTIVATION LETTER
Dear Sir or Madam,
With this motivation letter, I would like to express my interest in studying MBA program in GIHE.
Currently I am studying Tourism and Hotel Management at the Azerbaijan Tourism Institute. As I am final course student I am convinced that for prospective career I need to enrich the knowledge concerning Tourism Industry.

While searching for a suitable university abroad to continue my education I found that Glion is one of the best universities worldwide in this field and has over 50 years of excellence in Hospitality Management education. I am convinced that MBA program at the said high school would double my skills and knowledge and help me to become a high-level professional. Moreover, studying within the frames of MBA program would give me an excellent opportunity to learn more about Swiss education system and to improve my communication skills by getting acquainted with more people from different countries with diverse cultures.

I have chosen to apply for this program because I believe I will learn a lot from its modules of study. With its strong faculty support for deep learning and getting the skills for progress to leadership positions in the future motivated me strongly to apply. There are a lot of unique modules covering strategic issues in tourism that seem different from my home university's programs. Another reason is that I am very impressed with Glion's scenery location that offers students a perfect environment to balance their academic life with social.

My long term goal is to become a professional in Tourism Industry and build my own Spa Hotel in Azerbaijan. I am particularly interested in Hotel Management and I have discovered that GIHE is the right place for me to continue my knowledge and expose it in this field in future terms to succeed and turn my dream to reality.

I want to be one of the chosen for studying MBA program in Glion Institute of Higher Education having a chance to deepen my knowledge in the service industries, to be inspired to become a leader in current field and build my future.

Thank You for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.

Respectfully yours,
Afsana Aliyeva

As I am a final courseyear student in this course, I am now quite convinced that for prospective career I need to enrich the knowledge concerning Tourism Industry.I need to further enhance my knowledge on Tourism Industry if I am pursue a successful career in the industry.


While I was researching on a suitable foreign university for me to pursue my education, I found Glion as one of the best choices for me due to its excellent reputation and its long standing excellence in the field of Hospitality Management education.

Combine these two paras. First tell what your goals are and then tell how this program and the features of the uni help you achieve them. You need to link the two ideas. All what they want to know is that whether you make use of their course for achieving your goals, be them short or long term. So you need to bridge the two ideas and tell them how you are going to benefit from the program.