(to work in an international team) Motivation letter for intership

Dear, Sir
I am writing in to apply for the intern ship position at Your company which is scheduled from September 2011 to January 2012.

I am creative, goal orientated student with critical thinking who like to take new challenges. Architecture has attracted me since childhood, when I saw and helped out to my dad in different construction creative woodwork works at our house. Since that day that spirit to create new things haven't left me and it encourage to take new challenges.

I am second semester master student in Architecture and Design at Aalborg University, Denmark. The emphasis of my studies was combination of creative and analytical skills, aesthetic confidence and technical competence within a framework of problem-solving and design expertise. With aim transform function, aesthetics, production techniques and environmental protection into expressive architectural form, challenging designs, expressive urban environments or astonishing virtual worlds. But i also learned about other diverse topics such as integrate design, sustainable architecture, tectonics etc.

Due to the international framework of my studies and Problem Based Learning approach that Aalborg University imposes, I look forward to work in an international team and assisted with different projects through innovativeness, creativity and critical thinking.

This intern ship is suitable for me at this stage of my development process because as it fits my educational background, my continuing willingness to learn new things and represents a perfect chance to improve my skills. Furthermore, I learn quick new things, hard-working, motivated by goal achievements. Nothing provides me with more satisfaction than bringing contribution to the success of a project.

My resume and portfolio underlining my academic credentials are attached together with this application letter for your reference. Should you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me any time.

Thank you for your time and consideration in reviewing my materials. I look forward to hearing the news from you.

Sincerely,
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Greetings !

The essay displays understanding of the main issues. There may be some minor errors, omissions or poorly expressed ideas.

rephrase your sentence

It is my goal to combine my range of experiences with my ability to be a compassionate, enthusiastic, innovative educator who will make a positive contribution in establishing an energizing and creative learning environment that may help to enhance students' professional and personal achievement. I would welcome an interview and hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience.

Regards

I'll make some changes to improve the clarity:

I am a creative, goal-orientated student ready to apply my critical thinking skills to meet new challenges.

Due to the international framework of my studies and Problem Based Learning approach that Aalborg University imposes, I look forward to work in an international team and assisted assisting with different projects through ...

Furthermore, I learn quick new things quickly, and I am a hard-working, motivated student.

My resume and portfolio underlining my academic credentials are attached together with this application letter for your reference. ---This sentence uses a lot of words to say something you do not even need to say.

Should you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me any time.

Thank you for your time and consideration in reviewing my materials. I look forward to hearing the news from you. All this stuff is meaningless formality. I think you should replace them with sentences about your specific, interesting goals. Show that you already have an idea, your own idea that is motivating you. :-)

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