Forest ecosystem - Skill and knowledge to contribute to the development of your home country

solutions for the reforestation program

How will you use your new knowledge and skills to contribute to the development of your home country? (character limit 1200)

As the country places a special emphasize on endeavoring sustainable natural resource management and forest ecosystem restoration program, I would help the forest department revise the current reforestation program by informing them about the importance of landscape approaches in restoring degraded forests across the country. I will be sharing new skills such as forestry operation research techniques, and advance geospatial technology with the colleagues at my department in every possible opportunities, for example technical brainstorming meetings held by the department occasionally.

If I will be assigned to work at the local level office, I would apply theories about plantation silviculture, restoration ecology in carrying out the forestry operations while using the new skills such as how to monitor forest areas with the aid of cutting-edge technology like ArcGIS and remote sensing.

I also have plan to apply myself to the conduct of the forestry related researches which would help find solutions in addressing the challenges of the reforestation program that the department is currently implementing extensively

I think it should be "every possible opportunity"
I think it should be "also have planned"

There is not "If I will be..." in this essay. This is a post study plan. Which means you need to convince the reviewer that you have a viable career to go back to upon graduation. You also need to offer information that shows your career path in relation to the degree that you will be completing. Without that, the essay becomes weak and non-competitive.

For this essay, consider what your career plan upon your return to your country is. Indicate what you "will do" with certainty. Using words that refer to uncertainty in the essay will mean that you do not have a clue about what you will be doing after graduation. The essay needs to be revised to use a stronger, more confident voice. You can start this essay off, in a stronger manner by saying:

Upon my return to my country, my focus will be on securing a job at (agency). This agency is in charge of ( whatever that relates to your MS degree). I fully expect to be hired as a (position). This position will enable me to...

You get the idea. Revise the essay presentation accordingly.

@Holt
@Camilllla
Thanks for the feedback! I will incorporate your comments into revising the essays