FUTURE PLAN KGSP - Being a superb researcher

Hi again everyone.
I havent finished my study plan, that's why i post this future plan first hahahaha
Hope you all help me. Thank you.

FUTURE PLAN IN KOREA OR ANOTHER COUNTRY AFTER STUDY IN KOREA

Upon my graduate study, I plan to work in Korea as a researcher in a Korean pharmaceutical company, which manufactures medicines and cosmetics. I want to be responsible in the development of functional materials Including the animal and plant from natural product. Primarily, I want to explore natural product that controls skin problems by doing in vitro and in vivo tests. I aim large pharmaceutical company, such as Hanmi Pharmaceutical or Yuhan Medica Co., especially those who explore in the development of natural products as medicine or cosmetics. I plan to work for a few years, probably about three years. During these three years, I would successfully patent at least one unique natural product which has gone through clinical test.

Besides adding my experience and knowledge, working in Korea also became one of my gratitude to the Korean government who has given this scholarship opportunity. I would like to give my contribution to the development of natural and health-care products in Korea. With that work experience, I also hope to gain practical knowledge about the equipment or the latest technologies which I could apply in XXX (MY COUNTRY) in order to be developed as Korea.

After working in Korea, I would like to go back to XXX, and give my contribution there. I will work again as a researcher at a XXX Pharmaceutical company that focus on the study of natural product function, such as YYY or ZZZ. As I mentioned before, XXX is rich in natural resources that are still not widely known or used. Unfortunately, that potential is not followed by a rapid development which is shown by the small number of patented natural product. Therefore, i would like to solve that problem through using my experience and knowledge i have acquired in Korea. I want to make XXX a well-known natural products resources.

While working as a researcher, I also have a plan to become a lecturer. I want to teach some courses such as pharmacognosy, phytochemistry, and natural product technology. Being a lecturer is my another passion beside being a researcher. By teaching, I find myself being useful for others because I could deliver the knowledge that I have to the younger generations. I want to trigger them to study well and become a useful person for the country.

Novenia, this is a very good post study plan. You have covered all the bases, including how you plan to give back to the scholarship by patenting a product in the cosmetic industry. Since the gratitude is evident in all of your actions, there is no need for you to include paragraph 2. Just mention that you will patent one or two products while you are working in Korea, for the benefit of the Korean industry that trained you. Then when you go back to your home country, explain that you will then work on improving the local cosmetics and patent new formulas in your country. I have a suggestion though.

Since you are already well trained at that point, why don't you mention something about starting your own cosmetics firm after working in your country for a few years? The masters degree should also have a personal and life improving aspect and starting your own business, after your academic training and knowledge transfer activities, seems to be the logical ultimate step in your post study plan.

@Holt
Hi Ms Mary, this is the revised edition following your advice.
Thank you for the complement before ^^

Upon my graduate study, I plan [....], probably about three years. During these three years, I would successfully patent at least one unique natural product which has gone through clinical test, as my gratitude for Korea who has given this scholarship opportunity.

After working in Korea, I would like to go back to XXX, and give my contribution there. I will work again as a researcher at a XXX Pharmaceutical company that focus on the study of natural product application in cosmetic, such as YYY or ZZZ. As I mentioned before, XXX is rich in natural resources that are still not widely known or used. Unfortunately, that potential is not followed by a rapid development which is shown by the small number of patented natural product. Therefore, i would like to solve that problem through using my experience and knowledge i have acquired in Korea.I will improve the local natural product and patent new natural product, especially in cosmetic field.

Besides being a researcher, I also have a plan to become a lecturer. I want to teach some courses such as pharmacognosy, phytochemistry, and natural product technology. Being a lecturer is my another passion beside being a researcher. By teaching, I find myself being useful for others because I could deliver the knowledge that I have to the younger generations. I want to trigger them to study well and become a useful person for the country.

After working at pharmaceutical company for a few years, I want to start creating my own natural cosmetic industry. The cosmetic market is a good business and I want to focus on making a cosmetic that is created from natural active ingredient and environmentally-safe. Although there are a lot of competitor, but I know that consumers are always looking to try something new and innovative. I believe that I will survive in the cosmetic industry by creating an effective and safe cosmetic based on natural product.

This version just requires one minor grammar correction. In the final paragraph please say that you plan to create your own natural cosmetic "line" not industry. The industry is all encompassing. You only wish to become a part of it by owning your own natural cosmetics company. Therefore the term "line" is the proper description to use. The overall essay is now very much reflective of your post study plans. It does a great job at discussing the 5 year period of your future career and shows that you have a well thought out plan of action which is all doable in the future. You may consider this essay complete and usable. Aside from the minor correction I pointed out, everything else checks out fine. So go ahead and use the essay already after applying the correction. Don't ask for approval anymore. You already have it.

@Holt
You are very very helping hahahaha. i will continue with my study plan then..
Thank you :*