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Health and Public service - why you have selected your chosen three university courses



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Sep 23, 2024   #1
In my years as medical student now a medical doctor have opened up my eyes to various challenges affecting my country .My selected courses are all directed toward finding solution to these challenges.

My first choice is Health and Public service management provided in the university of South wales. this is because it provides knowledge and awareness of different theoretical approaches to health and policy making and the ability to be able to promote reflective thinking around public service innovation
My second choice is the Public health geared toward leadership and management at the university of Sheffield .Apart that it has beautiful library, this course combines health management and health economics .This will permit me to know the challenges of financing the health sector

My third choice is the Masters of Public Health at the University of South Wales whereby I will be able to learn about various statististics and epidemiology of various infectious diseases that have been epidemic in my country

I am fully aware that one year of study in the UK will not only help me develop my educational and teaching skill ,but it will be an opportunity to communicate with other health professional with international views and mental concepts from a variety background

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15200  
Sep 24, 2024   #2
The essay is direct to the point and presents the barest reasons for your choice of university. It is boring and lacking in information. The reviewer will not be interested in pursuing you as a student under the scholarship under any of these universities because you are not presenting any reasons for him to consider your interests in learning at these universities at this point.

A proper selection of universities should reflect your academic goals and professional skills that require improvement. These should clearly connect with the university course and location for further training (if possible). Enhance the essay by presenting your academic and personal considerations that led to the university choices. Make sure to indicate any impactful classes, professors, or training that you might receive per university. Be original in terms of discussing each university. There is no one size fits all discussion for this.


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