The importance of education - how furthering your education after high school will make your dreams become true?
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Dreams that could Come True
From the beginning of my childhood, my inspirational dream was to be a physician who could heal all the world's patients and share happiness. I was impressed by my uncle success, as he was one of the rare professional doctors in his town. But I knew that such a high thinking and achievable person cannot be possible without higher education. Through my past education years, they had improved me to be a great thinker, helped me to be a mature person, and it had developed a great sense of the applications around me. By continuing my education after high school: I could get more knowledge about the human body; I could develop career skills that they would help me to do my job easily; and also it would help me earn a PhD degree in medicine, so I could share my knowledge to the upcoming inspired students. Today, I feel that I cannot be more satisfied with my career than being part in alleviating someone's pains. Although, there is some successful individuals that didn't even finish college, like Bill Gates, and Jennifer Aniston, but that is simply rare. They had luck by their side and also had met the right people. As Shakespeare quotes "To climb steep hills requires a slow pace at first" I know that there is a long trip that I should go through first. Moreover, the moral profession of the physician often has a continuing education to improve their skills and open their eyes-wide on researches.
Please check my essay for things like essay development, organization, essay flaw, grammar, and relevance to the theme. (as the instruction states)
The limit is 250 words
Dreams that could Come True
From the beginning of my childhood, my inspirational dream was to be a physician who could heal all the world's patients and share happiness. I was impressed by my uncle success, as he was one of the rare professional doctors in his town. But I knew that such a high thinking and achievable person cannot be possible without higher education. Through my past education years, they had improved me to be a great thinker, helped me to be a mature person, and it had developed a great sense of the applications around me. By continuing my education after high school: I could get more knowledge about the human body; I could develop career skills that they would help me to do my job easily; and also it would help me earn a PhD degree in medicine, so I could share my knowledge to the upcoming inspired students. Today, I feel that I cannot be more satisfied with my career than being part in alleviating someone's pains. Although, there is some successful individuals that didn't even finish college, like Bill Gates, and Jennifer Aniston, but that is simply rare. They had luck by their side and also had met the right people. As Shakespeare quotes "To climb steep hills requires a slow pace at first" I know that there is a long trip that I should go through first. Moreover, the moral profession of the physician often has a continuing education to improve their skills and open their eyes-wide on researches.
