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Describe, in less than 2000 characters, an exceptional achievement that highlights your academic interests and intellectual capacity that would be of value to the NUS community.
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My interest in Economics developed early when I was in the JC1. What intrigued me most was how simple theories can attempt to resolve complex real world issues in both micro and macro markets, albeit with many assumptions in place. Realising that the assumption of 'ceteris paribus' never hold true in the real world, I often challenge myself to change multiple factors simultaneously and still attempt to resolve the issue, but to no avail. However, these minor setbacks only serve as a motivation for me, fuelling my interest on this particular social science.
Throughout my course of study, the exposure to different markets has also spawned my interest in the Business field, a discipline very much related to Economics. I believe that interest in both fields would develop me holistically, empowering me with the ability to contribute to both the public and private sector more effectively.
Despite my interest in Economics, my study was not smooth sailing. Being born in a Mandarin-speaking family, I struggled to achieve top grades in English since youth. I dreaded writing essays at the thought of the numerous "corrections" I would have to do due to awkward expressions and language errors. However, I did not throw in the towel. Instead, I chose to persevere and continue to strive for excellence. I clarified my doubts and worked hard to improve on my expressions. Gradually, I observe notable improvements in my essays and critical thinking skills and I manage to top my cohort in the JC1 year-end examinations for Economics. My consistent efforts eventually paid off in the 'A' levels when I obtained a respectable B grade for my General Paper and an A grade for Economics. At the end of the day, I am proud to be able to be able to "express complex ideas accurately and concisely in both spoken and written form" as my Economics tutor puts it.
One's value can only be proven if given a chance, and I certainly hope for an opportunity to prove my worth to the NUS community.
Describe, in less than 2000 characters, an exceptional achievement that highlights your academic interests and intellectual capacity that would be of value to the NUS community.
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My interest in Economics developed early when I was in the JC1. What intrigued me most was how simple theories can attempt to resolve complex real world issues in both micro and macro markets, albeit with many assumptions in place. Realising that the assumption of 'ceteris paribus' never hold true in the real world, I often challenge myself to change multiple factors simultaneously and still attempt to resolve the issue, but to no avail. However, these minor setbacks only serve as a motivation for me, fuelling my interest on this particular social science.
Throughout my course of study, the exposure to different markets has also spawned my interest in the Business field, a discipline very much related to Economics. I believe that interest in both fields would develop me holistically, empowering me with the ability to contribute to both the public and private sector more effectively.
Despite my interest in Economics, my study was not smooth sailing. Being born in a Mandarin-speaking family, I struggled to achieve top grades in English since youth. I dreaded writing essays at the thought of the numerous "corrections" I would have to do due to awkward expressions and language errors. However, I did not throw in the towel. Instead, I chose to persevere and continue to strive for excellence. I clarified my doubts and worked hard to improve on my expressions. Gradually, I observe notable improvements in my essays and critical thinking skills and I manage to top my cohort in the JC1 year-end examinations for Economics. My consistent efforts eventually paid off in the 'A' levels when I obtained a respectable B grade for my General Paper and an A grade for Economics. At the end of the day, I am proud to be able to be able to "express complex ideas accurately and concisely in both spoken and written form" as my Economics tutor puts it.
One's value can only be proven if given a chance, and I certainly hope for an opportunity to prove my worth to the NUS community.
